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Butterscotch Moon - Cowrite With James Marshall Goff

My hand Wet with tears pouring down my face Reaches out and finds nothing Empty spaces where familiar voices Once comforted me My only hope Is sleep, where dreams, in sketchy Re-wind, promise a glimpse of lost Loved ones, maybe a voice, if fleeting Even, to soothe me Those still with me Look to me for strength, my motor Memory urging me on, focusing On the well, deep in my heart, Cycle renews Another beloved soul passes Light they find But darkness they leave behind Grief Hungry monster Selfishly consumes my life Devours all glimmers of hope Leaving me Destitute on a perilous plane Mere existence Not life as it once was Sanity Confronting memories, loneliness Trek on an unbalanced bridge Connecting life and death Emotions purged Shadows of yesterday surround me Wisdom of loved ones Permeates my thoughts Filled With clear vision, handed down to me From my ancestors
*Co-written with James Marshall Goff and posted April 11, 2014.

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Date: 4/15/2014 10:25:00 PM
Am smilin' Carolyn! I know I'm biased....but I really dig the burning soul of this write! Flow is INTENSE! love it! Jimmy
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 4/16/2014 2:48:00 PM
Karen and Sandra loved it too, Jim. I'm so glad we decided to write together. I think it was a catharsis for both of us. Just remember, I'm only a phone call away, my friend. Love, Carolyn
Date: 4/15/2014 2:05:00 PM
Hi Carolyn, had to stop here to congratulate you, and James, for a great job done. It's very hard to try and find out which one of you did which parts (does that make sense!). Looks like a very close collaboration. :) best wishes // paul
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Date: 4/13/2014 11:56:00 AM
wowowow, this is amazing, CArolyn. One of your best. And to think you did it with someone else who must really be in synche with your feelings. This is such a great poem from you two.
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Date: 4/13/2014 11:56:00 AM
Also, it is really great to see you back here and posting a lot now.
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Date: 4/12/2014 4:11:00 PM
heartfelt and powerful write - you work so well together
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Date: 4/11/2014 5:16:00 PM
Interesting work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 4/11/2014 2:49:00 PM
Just want to thank Jimbo for collaborating on this poem with me. Jimbo, you are such a wonderful man. Love, Carolyn
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 4/11/2014 10:53:00 PM
Thank you, Carolyn....truly an honor! tho many miles away, our hearts were heard as one in this work...what a thrill! much love and respect for you...jimbo

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