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Butterfly smells-BABYS BREATH--- Bold beautiful, beautiful, bitter butterfly bakes hideous, heavy honey neat, nice nectar biskets Bountiful beautiful, bumpy, bright butterfly bakes hateful, horrid honey gnarly, nocturnal nectar biskets Best, bald butterfly bakes humid, hard honey nerdy, naive nectar biskets sucking on baby's breathe.......ahhhhh!!! 3/12/19

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Date: 3/12/2019 12:46:00 PM
Delightful piece... and love the way you ended it! ;D
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Date: 3/12/2019 6:21:00 AM
"naive nectar biskets sucking on baby's breath" - WOW! Your imagery makes my heart happy.
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