Butterfly Monarch King

It floats through the air effortlessly
Wings beating at high velocity
A navigational marvel instinctively
It's amazing with 5 stages of puberty

With a 4" wingspan it's really impressive
Every one tries to catch one for their collection
They fly every which way in every direction
Stunning beauty seen upon closer inspection

The monarch is king of all butterflies
the rest pale in comparison
Flies from Canada to Mexico
to the fourth generation.

It's an amazing creature with one 
distinguishing feature
You can tell the male 
by the black spot on the tail.

The complete metamorphosis from one
form to another.
Reminds me how we too can change
from one thing to another.

From selfish to kind, 
from hateful to loving
but we must make the choice, as
we are free agents,
free like the butterfly
but without instinctive
wisdom we need help from above.

John Derek Hamilton
December 13,2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A. Sharma Avatar
December 18, 2015 at 10:30 PM
What a beauty in ur words John.. congrats on big win!
Hamilton Avatar
December 19, 2015 at 10:43 AM
Thanks very much Dr and for your participation in my contest!
Scars Avatar
December 18, 2015 at 9:06 PM
Congrats John for your placement! -luloo :)
Hamilton Avatar
December 19, 2015 at 10:42 AM
Thanks Laura, always appreciated. You did very well in my contest! Thanks
Cwiak Avatar
December 18, 2015 at 6:40 PM
I agree with Joe, this is a great tale and observation about the Monarch. Kudos to you for such introspection and ability to bring them together in such a winner.
Hamilton Avatar
December 19, 2015 at 10:40 AM
Thanks Dan I appreciate it.
Maverick Avatar
December 18, 2015 at 3:02 PM
Really enjoyed this Dereck, great tale and observations..' Congrats on the winner..
Hamilton Avatar
December 19, 2015 at 10:40 AM
Thanks Joe. John
Lamoureux Avatar
December 18, 2015 at 10:10 AM
You did this very well, congratulations.
Hamilton Avatar
December 19, 2015 at 10:38 AM
Thanks Richard, you did well in my contest too! Thanks!
A   Avatar
December 18, 2015 at 1:35 AM
WOW, John, Congratulations on your wonderful butterfly win. Love LINDA
Hamilton Avatar
December 19, 2015 at 10:36 AM
Thanks Linda.
Wigley Avatar
December 18, 2015 at 12:23 AM
A lovely write, with a nice bit of philosophy thrown in the mix. Well done, John. Regards, Viv
Hamilton Avatar
December 19, 2015 at 10:36 AM
Thanks Viv nice to hear from you!
Haight Avatar
December 17, 2015 at 8:34 PM
Hi John, congratulations on your placement in the butterfly contest. Nice job! Sandra
Hamilton Avatar
December 19, 2015 at 10:35 AM
Thanks Sandra. You did well in my happiness contest!
A  Avatar
December 17, 2015 at 7:22 PM
JOHN, I'm impressed, I guess men can write about any given theme. Thank you for supporting my contest. It was a delight to host. I'm still smiling after reading and closing and posting my new blog. Congratulations on your AWESOME WIN... Stop by my latest Blog "I GUESS THEY CAN... HOW ABOUT IT LADIES???" help celebrate and tell me why you decided to join THIS contest. Looking forward in hearing from you. Love SKAT
Hamilton Avatar
December 19, 2015 at 10:34 AM
Thanks SKAT
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