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Butterfly Dreaming

" I dreamt, I was a butterfly, or was I a butterfly dreaming..." Lit wings Reflected, Captivating. Awed, I reach out to her, Sighing. Graceful, Silently Fascinating. Diamond drops cascade down. Tears. Ever Enchanting, Pale shimmering. Somehow she cannot see Her wings. Joyful, Entrancing, I lift her chin. "With such wings, you can fly!" I try. Glowing, Delightful, She wipes her tears. Downcast wings start to flutter. Smiling, Suddenly Remembering. Enrapturing in her Found Wings. Beth Watkins Daydreams and dreams and dreams Poetry Contest 07/11/11

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Date: 7/18/2011 7:50:00 AM
Congratulations Beth on your win in the contest of Constance La France "Day Dreams and dreams and dreams" Love, Carol
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Date: 7/15/2011 8:18:00 PM
This is beautiful, Beth. Many congrats on your super win, Lainie
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Date: 7/15/2011 6:23:00 PM
Congrats Beth on another great big win in daydreaming contest with this first class poetry luv..enjoy another wow win..
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Date: 7/15/2011 5:58:00 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of constance, Beth
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Date: 7/11/2011 9:12:00 AM
great writing..Love this..good luck in the contest.
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Date: 7/11/2011 9:00:00 AM
a write so extraordinary, beth.. i love the flow of your stringed cingkus; found wings smiling... brilliant!.. winning wishes with huggs:) nette
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