Butterfly Dreaming

" I dreamt, I was a butterfly, or was I a butterfly dreaming..."

Lit wings
Reflected,
Captivating.
Awed, I reach out to her, 
Sighing.

Graceful,
Silently
Fascinating.
Diamond drops cascade down.
Tears.

Ever 
Enchanting,
Pale shimmering.
Somehow she cannot see
Her wings.

Joyful,
Entrancing,
I lift her chin.
"With such wings, you can fly!"
I try.

Glowing,
Delightful,
She wipes her tears.
Downcast wings start to
flutter.

Smiling,
Suddenly
Remembering.
Enrapturing in her
Found Wings.

Beth Watkins
Daydreams and dreams and dreams Poetry Contest
07/11/11
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Brown Avatar
July 18, 2011 at 7:50 AM
Congratulations Beth on your win in the contest of Constance La France "Day Dreams and dreams and dreams" Love, Carol
George   Avatar
July 15, 2011 at 8:18 PM
This is beautiful, Beth. Many congrats on your super win, Lainie
Sweetheart Avatar
July 15, 2011 at 6:23 PM
Congrats Beth on another great big win in daydreaming contest with this first class poetry luv..enjoy another wow win..
Mehta Avatar
July 15, 2011 at 5:58 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of constance, Beth
Warden Avatar
July 11, 2011 at 9:12 AM
great writing..Love this..good luck in the contest.
Onclaud Avatar
July 11, 2011 at 9:00 AM
a write so extraordinary, beth.. i love the flow of your stringed cingkus; found wings smiling... brilliant!.. winning wishes with huggs:) nette
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