Butterfly Dance

Dance for me beautiful butterfly 
Flutter me wise
Carry me upward to blue skies
Reveal rainbow effervescence to my eyes

My perfect moment encased in time
Within my heart you plant a hopeful seed
Like many wild flowers you fill my need
Waltz in my garden please take the lead

Dance for me beautiful butterfly
Reveal all the colours I long to see
Psychedelic wings defying simple gravity
I sit in wonder watching you breathlessly 

With nets people try to capture infinity
Angelic beings in this world are far too few
My hope through painted eyes you do renew
Heavenly glimpses when into my life you flew

Dance for me beautiful butterfly
On pleasured currents help me rise
I am but an observer I wholly realize
Reveal rainbow effervescence to my eyes!

Waltz in my garden please take the lead
I sit in wonder watching you breathlessly 
Heavenly glimpses when into my life you flew
Revealing rainbow effervescence saying I love you too!

I dedicate this piece to the love of my life. My sweetie makes my heart flutter,
25 years of joy and she makes each day special.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 8/26/2019 6:40:00 PM
G'day Richard … really nice set of lyrics Richard. Butterflies appear to present daintiness with their soft silent flight and colour and so provide gentleness when we compare them to our own lives - thank you Richard - Lindsay
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/26/2019 8:00:00 PM
Thanks Lindsay. ;0)
Date: 10/20/2018 1:32:00 PM
Hi Richard, an excellent lyric for your own, beautiful, brown eyes. This is such a wonderful write written from the heart and it touches the heart of the reader deeply. A song from the heart shall always touch the soul. The butterfly shall always fly Richard for love is the eternal. I love the content my friend. The imagery, in beauty, sings into my mind. This has to be a fave Richard. Have a wonderful weekend. Your friend always....Mike.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/22/2018 7:30:00 AM
You are kind Mike!
Date: 7/18/2018 2:02:00 AM
Hi Richard. This is a beautiful lyric. I love the imagery within it. I particularly enjoyed the line 'Reveal all the colours I long to see'. Have you had this lyric put to music?
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/18/2018 8:46:00 AM
Thanks George. No I haven’t had it put to music. If you are inclined to do so feel free to do so, I would be honoured.
Date: 5/16/2018 12:05:00 PM
Hi Richard. Ditto here. We both were taken in by them and both our poems are on best new poems lying side by side.I read yours now you can read mine too ha ha
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Date: 5/2/2018 5:29:00 PM
Stunningly beautiful like the butterfly itself. She must be a very special lady. sincerely, Elaine George
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Date: 5/2/2018 2:39:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful lines here Richard, encapsulating your feelings for the love of your life, compared to a butterfly entering your life. So romantic and lovely, a definite fave for me....Maria
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/2/2018 7:13:00 AM
Good morning and Thanks Maria. Hugs Rick.
Date: 4/29/2018 8:53:00 PM
Rick you've taken something already beautiful and made it majestic. An entrancing ride you've taken me on.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/30/2018 9:37:00 AM
Thanks Flo, you brought me a smile.
Date: 4/29/2018 2:35:00 PM
Hello Richard, I love the butterflies to. The colours are so beautiful. Have a nice day my friend. o
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/30/2018 9:37:00 AM
Thanks Darlene.
Date: 4/29/2018 2:59:00 AM
Excellent piece, you big softy, I shall fave it. Thanks. Regards, Viv
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/29/2018 9:31:00 AM
Ha ha, thanks Viv.
Date: 4/28/2018 9:24:00 PM
:) Your love for Mary is a testament to abiding love, Richard. This is a beautiful piece and it is laced with love.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/29/2018 9:20:00 AM
Thanks Eileen.
Date: 4/28/2018 11:29:00 AM
Richard, this is one of the most beautiful, romantic dedications that I have read here! I am sure your wife is so thrilled! I enjoyed reading this tender-loving lyric with its amazing imagery and smooth flowing lines - just a gem! This is definitely a fave for me! Love and hugs. Pandita
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/29/2018 9:20:00 AM
Thanks Pandita.
Date: 4/28/2018 8:23:00 AM
A very lovely metaphorical poem, Richard. May this butterfly dance for you for many years to come! Regards // paul
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/28/2018 8:41:00 AM
Thanks Paul.
Date: 4/27/2018 4:54:00 AM
love you when in this mood Richard..classic poetry,
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/27/2018 7:51:00 AM
Thanks Harry, it was a fun one to write.
Date: 4/27/2018 1:33:00 AM
a very clever patterned verse you came up with here. Loved how the last three lines of each stanza rhymed. I expected maybe you would do something with the first lines kind of like making them match up in the end! I think there is some poetry form that does that. Very pretty. I saw a typo in verse 4 line 2. (to) few. It's really nice seeing you take on lyrical verse.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/27/2018 8:11:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, I took your suggestion.
Date: 4/26/2018 4:36:00 PM
Such a tender beautiful dance... Well expressed Richard..
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/27/2018 7:52:00 AM
Thanks Silent.
Date: 4/25/2018 5:13:00 PM
Your "butterfly's" colorful wings and delightful dance can, indeed, remind us of angels. It must be heavenly to have such an inspired love. Beautiful poetry, Richard! Hugs, Carolyn.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/26/2018 9:00:00 AM
Thanks Carolyn. Hi hugs Rick.
Date: 4/25/2018 8:49:00 AM
A great poem, Richard, enjoyed it. For me the butterfly is a metaphor for a beautiful young woman. John
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/25/2018 9:05:00 AM
You are very perceptive John.
Date: 4/24/2018 6:10:00 PM
Lovely conversation with a butterfly.. Wish we had more of them to see.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/25/2018 9:05:00 AM
That would be lovely.
Date: 4/24/2018 1:57:00 PM
- A beautiful poem, Richard ... a pleasure to read :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/25/2018 8:42:00 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise. :0)
Date: 4/24/2018 1:55:00 PM
a radiant poem which makes me want to dance on your page, rich!..huggs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/25/2018 8:34:00 AM
What a lovely response.
Date: 4/24/2018 12:45:00 PM
I love the bookends of this poem, Richard ... and everything inked in-between. Such a beautiful, shimmering insightful poem. Your pen stokes golden hues of muse truth. Celestial grade prose. Love and joy always.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/25/2018 8:10:00 AM
Hi Freddie, I’m pleased you enjoyed this piece.
Date: 4/24/2018 11:25:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poem, Richard..beautiful flow and rhythm..just lovely!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/25/2018 8:07:00 AM
Thanks Vijay.
Date: 4/24/2018 9:49:00 AM
WoW! Richard, These are some good lyrics. I for one am groovin to the beat of every line and stanza. You were able to take the lovely butterfly and pen something amazing. Because of your piece I don't think I can look at a butterfly the same way. Excellent job:-) Alexis
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/25/2018 8:00:00 AM
Thanks Alexis, it was fun to write.
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