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Butterfly Beginnings

The butterfly flutters by begin, begin as in true in nature love springs. Ageless amazing nerves sing, bowed tension on cello string. Eyes which will not let go, Father of Fire was bound, just so. Bound was man by the gift of flame for love brings man both joy and pain. Butterflies flutter within the begin ageless amazing nerves sing, Bowed tension on cello string a trail of kisses flowing, sting. Dry tinder burning in Earth bound glory love to Eye tells a comet’s trailing story. Love begins on butterflies wings with the bowed tension of a cello's string.

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Date: 6/8/2014 8:36:00 PM
Debbie, Congratulations, in Kelly's Butterfly Fluttering By.. Sweet move... LINDA
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Date: 6/4/2014 2:54:00 PM
Debbie, congratulations on a beautiful win!
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Date: 6/4/2014 7:38:00 AM
Congratulations, Debbie, on a well-deserved win!
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Date: 6/4/2014 7:11:00 AM
I love this write my friend. Congrats on the win!!!
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Date: 6/4/2014 5:02:00 AM
Lovely write Debbie ,, cud never imagine it wud flow so wonderful in this form ! congrats on win !
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Date: 6/4/2014 1:17:00 AM
Congrats on a fine win, Debbie
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Date: 6/3/2014 9:11:00 PM
The depth and the drama in these words tells me that there is more to this story, than just butterflies!.... A great set of couplets, Debbie! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 6/3/2014 7:47:00 PM
"Love begins on butterfly wings"...lovely write Debbie...Congrats on your win
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Date: 5/18/2010 7:05:00 AM
Thank you for your much needed compliment and once again thanks for welcoming me...oh and by the way, what a nice write...
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Date: 4/8/2010 5:39:00 PM
Sorry i already read this one. What the heck. I can read it again. .....Okay still gots it touch.
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Date: 4/1/2010 3:00:00 PM
These last few poems of yours, should be combined in a lovely spring edition.....mmmm just lovely, Debbie!!
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Date: 4/1/2010 1:03:00 PM
I enjoyed that!
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Date: 4/1/2010 11:36:00 AM
Interesting write about the new appearance of the butterfly...Saw one this morning and was somewhat shocked to see one...It was feeding on the nectar from a daffodil..Sara
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Date: 4/1/2010 6:57:00 AM
I love this Deborah... bowed tension of a cello's string how profound of a statement that is.... Two Thumbs Up.... xoxoxoxox
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Date: 4/1/2010 4:25:00 AM
I liked this Deborah, yes very much , thanks for the visit to my work Daniel
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Date: 4/1/2010 12:23:00 AM
Lik the alliterarion Easter greetings Debbie & thank you for your welcome comments today.Rgds Brian
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Date: 3/31/2010 9:28:00 PM
Yes, I can get to the place. Will it not let you get there...?
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Date: 3/31/2010 11:17:00 AM
the butterfly is being used as a metaphor for the pattern left by two lips as they kiss and for the sensation of joy, love, one feels in the pit of ones stomach the verse is not acutally about butterflys (duck)
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Date: 3/31/2010 11:10:00 AM
A lovely post. Enjoyed butterflies...
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Date: 3/30/2010 3:09:00 PM
Just stopping by to wish you a Happy Easter.
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Date: 3/30/2010 12:59:00 AM
Hey, Deb, an interesting read. I too loved the butterfly wings. I finally got up my RECAP blog on all that numerology stuff. EGADS, took me all night. LUv ya, Andrea
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Date: 3/29/2010 5:09:00 PM
This is lovely. Very pretty. Thank you for your comments. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/29/2010 9:04:00 AM
very pretty write i like the butterfly wings line,
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Date: 3/29/2010 6:30:00 AM
"with the bowed tension of a cello's string", I love that line, great read!
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Date: 3/29/2010 5:58:00 AM
U are a sweet butterfly too Deb for writing this beautiful tribute to a most elegant creation .. my first poem written was Butterfly and I so enjoy watching them and reading your poetry this early Monday morn.. luv.. check out my new blog too..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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