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Sun bronzes my wings As I flutter in the wind Drinking the nectar of flowers Chasing lovers in skies bright or grim Dancing on clouds swirly white Softly I sing of natures right To love all other breathing things A God who says different Is a serpent who sins

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James Fraser

Date: 8/18/2018 6:59:00 AM

A light to delight Arthur :) the last two lines are wonderful, James :)

Supraja Kannan

Date: 1/1/2018 2:48:00 AM

Wow... Such a beautiful Poem... I enjoyed it...

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/31/2017 10:05:00 PM

Arthur, your poem enraptures me.. simply beautiful poetry with a lovely loving message.. Warmest wishes ~Susan

Sara Ella

Date: 12/24/2017 4:16:00 PM

"To love all other breathing things" this is beautiful Art <3

Eve Roper

Date: 12/23/2017 11:43:00 PM

Awesome :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/22/2017 8:44:00 PM

I feel you are saying something more than just talking about a butterfly here, Arthur. I really like the last two lines but wish I understood them better! This little poem is very beautiful.

White Wolf

Date: 12/22/2017 4:39:00 PM

Finally, I get this one!!! Awesome, my friend!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 12/22/2017 10:37:00 AM

An ephemeral penning Arthur, your pen dipped in rich ink. Enjoyed :) Merry Christmas to you and yours my friend! much love xomo

Arturo Michael

Date: 12/22/2017 9:48:00 AM

Lovely poem, this line caught my eyes..." Chasing lovers in skies bright or grim." All the best Arthur

Tim Smith

Date: 12/22/2017 8:08:00 AM

Love is where it's at

Jan Allison

Date: 12/22/2017 7:02:00 AM

A joy to read this winter morning Arthur. :-) hugs jan xx

Pipping Stars

Date: 12/22/2017 6:50:00 AM

ok ... if you are a butterfly ... "to love all other breathing things" uhm do cockroaches breathe ... does a brown recluse breathe ... does a cobra breathe ... ok ... "to love all other breathing things" perhaps a "Santa clause" ... i can love any breathing thing ... if I hate what that breathing thing does ... what does that make me ... if that breathing thing is living under the rock with the serpent ... what does it make me if i hate what the serpent does ... now ... mull that over with God.

Lin Lane
Date: 12/22/2017 11:36:00 AM

I must say you delved deeply to find negativity in a poem about a butterfly and all things that God created. I think you need to dig a little deeper in your mulling process to discover why God created the things you say you hate. He has his reasons for everything and it's not for the simple mind of any human to question Him.