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Butterfly - Firefly

Oh butterfly, earth's gift of renewed hope Transformed from nothingness to work of art. Bright fleeting beauty dancing in the sun With perfect symmetry of form and style... A painted flutter, splashing joy through space. I'll fly with butterflies through light of day, Life's vivid beauty dancing in the sun, With flowing grace to fill my hungry soul, And ray of hope to paint my eager heart, Sweet happiness will walk the earth with me. And firefly, the glowing gem of night, Elusive spark that celebrates day's end With mini fireworks for nature's joy, Erupting out of nowhere in the dark... A flashing star on sky of velvet black. I'll glow with fireflies through dark of night, Death's twinkling silence dancing in the black With jubilation lighting up my soul, Its luminescence blinding still my heart, As death's adventure lifts me to the stars. Sandra M. Haight ~9th Place~ Premiere Contest: Favorite Free Verse (not for contest) Sponsor: Laura Loo Judged: 03/22/2018

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Date: 3/22/2018 8:02:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful Sandra. The breathtaking imagery used in your comparisons between light-dark, day-night, life-death is stunning. 'A painted flutter, splashing joy through space' -Simply so poetic.. it's lines like this throughout your poem that lifts your poem to beyond heaven. Congratulations on your excellent win my friend. ~Warmest wishes. ~Susan
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/23/2018 6:30:00 PM
Dear Susan, I am so thankful for your very uplifting and supportive comments and words of encouragement. It made me happy that you enjoyed the metaphors. I so much appreciate your visits and kind words. Warmest wishes back you. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/22/2018 11:43:00 AM
I love butterflies and fireflies! Your wonderful poem brought welcome emotions and was a pleasure to read! Congrats on your win, Sandra :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/23/2018 6:24:00 PM
Thank you very much, Laura, for your lovely supportive comments and congrats. I am so pleased that you enjoyed my poem. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/22/2018 8:18:00 AM
Sooo beautiful, Sandra! CONGRATS! Janice
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/22/2018 8:25:00 AM
Thank you so much, Janice! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/22/2018 6:11:00 AM
beautiful imagery sweet Sandra...great poem! thank you and congratulations! :)-luloo
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/22/2018 8:25:00 AM
Thank you, Laura, for your lovely comment, congrats and placement in your contest. Hugs, Sandra

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