Butterfly

Believer of starlight, 
Blooming love in twilight
Bestows soft latte skies, 
Blissful faith of peach dyes
Bronze balm in sun's flutter, 
Bright glow of honey in
Butterfly's mauve kismet.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Lindley Avatar
September 17, 2023 at 5:19 AM
My friend this is indeed a gem of beauty. Butterflies I have always loved them. You fine descriptive powers on display with this colorful jewel my good friend. I am fav'ing this beauty. As it is short and sweet. God bless you.
Merryman Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 7:43 PM
Beautiful imagery, Hiya! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
Jayasankar Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 6:14 AM
I just loved this... First two lines... "Believer of starlight", " blooming love in twilight ".... awesome... Butterflies always inspire us isn't it?... So glad to read all your inspiring poems dear Hiya... Congratulations on your win... Hugs... ~ Ani
May Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 5:49 PM
Congrats on your win Hiya, Nicely done
Anaya Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 11:07 AM
You've inspired me, Hiya. Gracefully done with metaphors and imagery the beautiful butterfly deserves in six syllables! Good luck to you. ~Anaya
Anaya Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 1:43 PM
Back to wish you Congratulations on your win, Hiya!!!
DiMino Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 9:40 AM
Delightful imagery! Indeed, for one to read and be wrapped in tender dreams, secured with promise of a lover's bow.
Kendrick Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 3:32 AM
Excellent b words and a very descriptive write you have penned. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
Volumes Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 12:01 AM
Bravo ! A beguiling butterfly beams beside beautiful blossoms. Your poem bestows bountiful beauty dear Hiya. Best Blessings SV
Rodrigues Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 5:56 PM
Lovely imagery!
Baker Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 4:53 PM
Lovely Pleisdes, Hiya. I especially liked the alliteration, bronze balm. :-) Thanks for sharing your poetry with us, my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Romios Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 11:51 AM
Hiya….Golly, what a stunning pen and beautiful mind/soul you possess. Pangie xx Celebrating POTD today, I am joyful. Thank god for this gift
Rose  Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 10:54 AM
Beautiful blessings be yours and mine as I read :)
Pandit Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 8:58 AM
Blooming love in twilight---soft latte skies--peach dyes--mauve kismet-- a symphony of colors woven in deep emotions succinctly delivered in just a few words. A FAVE from me for this superb, talented write, Hiya.
One Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 8:13 AM
A lovely selection of words and use of the butterfly. It is a very good take on this from and you have done well despite the restrictions on syllables... I really like the last line about Butterfly's mauve kismet... lovely imagery.
Buhagiar Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 8:12 AM
Splendid Pleiades on a Butterfly, so beloved by all for its beauty. Your lines are full of meaning and visuals that I thoroughly enjoyed.
Sharma  Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 3:06 AM
Thank you so much for visiting my page and leaving such a kind feedback, I'm so glad that you enjoyed reading this Pleiades, means so much :)
Poet Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 7:21 AM
Your Pleiades poem is truly captivating, dear Hiya! The charm of the letter 'B' shines brilliantly in every line, casting a spell of enchantment over the reader. Butterflies, those delicate creatures, have long been a muse for poets, and your interpretation of their beauty and symbolism is truly one-of-a-kind. Your words transport us to a world filled with vibrant imagery, where each verse is a window into a new and mesmerizing scene. I wish you the best of luck in the contest, and may your weekend be filled with joy and tranquility.
Sharma  Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 3:05 AM
Dear Sotto, thank you so much for your ever glowing feedback and beautifully uplifting words. I feel immensely grateful for your unparalleled kindness and support always, and I'm so thrilled that you enjoyed reading this Pleiades poem! :)
Empress Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 5:46 AM
This i can confidently say is one of your best micros, I absolutely love the cadence and flow of butterfly kismet flowing within your rhymes and imagery. So stunning and captivating. I especially love how you’ve started the poem with “ believer of starlight, blooming love in twilight” wow! That jus drew me in!! And those latte skies and peach dyes of faith with honeyed glowed on kismet just blew me away. So dreamy and profound . Very wel crafted for the theme. One of my faves. Goodluck
Sharma  Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 3:21 AM
Thank you sooo much for your extremely precious and kind words my dear Ink, I'm beyond thrilled that this write is one your fav, truly means the world.. You always know how to uplift my soul with such appreciative feedback :)
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