Butterfly

Believer of starlight, Blooming love in twilight Bestows soft latte skies, Blissful faith of peach dyes Bronze balm in sun's flutter, Bright glow of honey in Butterfly's mauve kismet.

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Robert Lindley

Date: 9/17/2023 5:19:00 AM

My friend this is indeed a gem of beauty. Butterflies I have always loved them. You fine descriptive powers on display with this colorful jewel my good friend. I am fav'ing this beauty. As it is short and sweet. God bless you.

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/15/2023 7:43:00 PM

Beautiful imagery, Hiya! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 9/14/2023 6:14:00 AM

I just loved this... First two lines... "Believer of starlight", " blooming love in twilight ".... awesome... Butterflies always inspire us isn't it?... So glad to read all your inspiring poems dear Hiya... Congratulations on your win... Hugs... ~ Ani

Joseph May

Date: 9/11/2023 5:49:00 PM

Congrats on your win Hiya, Nicely done

I Am Anaya

Date: 9/10/2023 11:07:00 AM

You've inspired me, Hiya. Gracefully done with metaphors and imagery the beautiful butterfly deserves in six syllables! Good luck to you. ~Anaya

I Am Anaya
Date: 9/11/2023 1:43:00 PM

Back to wish you Congratulations on your win, Hiya!!!

Joe Dimino

Date: 9/10/2023 9:40:00 AM

Delightful imagery! Indeed, for one to read and be wrapped in tender dreams, secured with promise of a lover's bow.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/10/2023 3:32:00 AM

Excellent b words and a very descriptive write you have penned. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Speaks Volumes

Date: 9/10/2023 12:01:00 AM

Bravo ! A beguiling butterfly beams beside beautiful blossoms. Your poem bestows bountiful beauty dear Hiya. Best Blessings SV

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/9/2023 5:56:00 PM

Lovely imagery!

Bill Baker

Date: 9/9/2023 4:53:00 PM

Lovely Pleisdes, Hiya. I especially liked the alliteration, bronze balm. :-) Thanks for sharing your poetry with us, my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 9/9/2023 1:15:00 PM

an eloquent and Pleiades masterfully crafted. I read your poem because butterflies are my favorite creatures. You certainly honored them with your words. Sara

Panagiota Romios

Date: 9/9/2023 11:51:00 AM

Hiya….Golly, what a stunning pen and beautiful mind/soul you possess. Pangie xx Celebrating POTD today, I am joyful. Thank god for this gift

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 9/9/2023 10:54:00 AM

Beautiful blessings be yours and mine as I read :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/9/2023 8:58:00 AM

Blooming love in twilight---soft latte skies--peach dyes--mauve kismet-- a symphony of colors woven in deep emotions succinctly delivered in just a few words. A FAVE from me for this superb, talented write, Hiya.

Silent One

Date: 9/9/2023 8:13:00 AM

A lovely selection of words and use of the butterfly. It is a very good take on this from and you have done well despite the restrictions on syllables... I really like the last line about Butterfly's mauve kismet... lovely imagery.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/9/2023 8:12:00 AM

Splendid Pleiades on a Butterfly, so beloved by all for its beauty. Your lines are full of meaning and visuals that I thoroughly enjoyed.

Hiya Sharma
Date: 9/12/2023 3:06:00 AM

Thank you so much for visiting my page and leaving such a kind feedback, I'm so glad that you enjoyed reading this Pleiades, means so much :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/9/2023 7:21:00 AM

Your Pleiades poem is truly captivating, dear Hiya! The charm of the letter 'B' shines brilliantly in every line, casting a spell of enchantment over the reader. Butterflies, those delicate creatures, have long been a muse for poets, and your interpretation of their beauty and symbolism is truly one-of-a-kind. Your words transport us to a world filled with vibrant imagery, where each verse is a window into a new and mesmerizing scene. I wish you the best of luck in the contest, and may your weekend be filled with joy and tranquility.

Hiya Sharma
Date: 9/12/2023 3:05:00 AM

Dear Sotto, thank you so much for your ever glowing feedback and beautifully uplifting words. I feel immensely grateful for your unparalleled kindness and support always, and I'm so thrilled that you enjoyed reading this Pleiades poem! :)

Tom Woody

Date: 9/9/2023 6:11:00 AM

Butterflies are a frequent source of poetic inspiration. I mean really, who can say anything bad about butterflies? Only the most cynical, I suppose. Your poetry is always so rich, so descriptive. Hope you have a pleasant weekend

Hiya Sharma
Date: 9/11/2023 3:23:00 AM

Indeed, butterflies are one of the most lovely creations of nature. Thank you so much for your beautiful and generous words always, Tom, I'm so glad that you enjoyed reading this. Have a wonderful day :)

Ink Empress

Date: 9/9/2023 5:46:00 AM

This i can confidently say is one of your best micros, I absolutely love the cadence and flow of butterfly kismet flowing within your rhymes and imagery. So stunning and captivating. I especially love how you’ve started the poem with “ believer of starlight, blooming love in twilight” wow! That jus drew me in!! And those latte skies and peach dyes of faith with honeyed glowed on kismet just blew me away. So dreamy and profound . Very wel crafted for the theme. One of my faves. Goodluck

Hiya Sharma
Date: 9/11/2023 3:21:00 AM

Thank you sooo much for your extremely precious and kind words my dear Ink, I'm beyond thrilled that this write is one your fav, truly means the world.. You always know how to uplift my soul with such appreciative feedback :)