Butterfly

BUTTERFLY IN TUTU

Butterfly in tutu, deliriously delusional, bright
with spangles, tapping her wings.  All knew
she was cocky with glorified golden teeth.

She followed the cockamamie caterpillar 
with his root-tootie-toot-toot flute. Thoughts
of mopping up this contest after that

creepy-crawly performance. Her tutu, in
and out, in and out. Her wings of grace
up and down, up and down impeccable.

but the Operettes were up next - they were stars!
Dusk dimmed butterfly’s oscaring, dark
and darker, the glare of stars fell. The iridescent 

tutu turned black, she stubbed her wings,
she spun out and crashed, and the audience
laughed……………………instead of hiding

                         she took a bow

                             12/23/2021
                              “B” Forms
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 1/20/2022 11:12:00 AM
Kim, congratulations on your Third Place win in my B Forms contest ~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/20/2022 3:29:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 1/11/2022 8:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a creative story/write. Yes, take a bow. Have a blessed day with your win...............
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/11/2022 9:10:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 1/11/2022 8:20:00 AM
Lovely. I like the ending, it took courage!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/11/2022 9:10:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 1/10/2022 8:34:00 PM
Great depiction of butterfly in Burlesque form. Whole poem is very beautiful. Congratulations!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/11/2022 6:08:00 AM
Thank you so much…butterfly kisses ~
Date: 1/10/2022 5:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your superb well- deserved win. You penned an exquisite poem full of great thoughts metaphors.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/11/2022 6:08:00 AM
Thank you, Lasaad!
Date: 1/1/2022 2:52:00 PM
Very imaginative. I like it.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/11/2022 6:08:00 AM
Thanks, Mike!
Date: 12/31/2021 7:39:00 PM
You have amusingly described the dance of the butterfly in tutu. This poem has a great visual effect Kim ....
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/11/2022 6:08:00 AM
Thank you, Valsa!
Date: 12/31/2021 6:55:00 AM
That was very enjoyable, Kim...and I love how it ended! ~ Best wishes for the New Year!! // paul
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/31/2021 7:51:00 AM
Thank you, Paul! Happy New Year! :)
Date: 12/30/2021 1:08:00 PM
Hello!Kim I found this poem quite entertaining. Trying to imagine a butterfly in a tutu made me laugh. Great story, Debra.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/31/2021 7:51:00 AM
Thank you, Debra!
Date: 12/29/2021 12:31:00 AM
I'm trying to imagine a butterfly in a tutu. Great burlesque. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/29/2021 7:25:00 AM
Hugs to you, dear friend! ~
Date: 12/28/2021 10:10:00 PM
Cute verse, Kim. Good luck in the contest. Happy New Year Wishes.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/29/2021 7:24:00 AM
Thank you! Happy New Year!
Date: 12/28/2021 6:04:00 PM
Exciting, fun and lovely, Kim. This is a fave for me. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/28/2021 6:23:00 PM
Thank you, Evelyn!
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