Butterfly

BUTTERFLY IN TUTU

Butterfly in tutu, deliriously delusional, bright
with spangles, tapping her wings.  All knew
she was cocky with glorified golden teeth.

She followed the cockamamie caterpillar 
with his root-tootie-toot-toot flute. Thoughts
of mopping up this contest after that

creepy-crawly performance. Her tutu, in
and out, in and out. Her wings of grace
up and down, up and down impeccable.

but the Operettes were up next - they were stars!
Dusk dimmed butterfly’s oscaring, dark
and darker, the glare of stars fell. The iridescent 

tutu turned black, she stubbed her wings,
she spun out and crashed, and the audience
laughed……………………instead of hiding

                         she took a bow

                             12/23/2021
                              “B” Forms
             Sponsor: Constance La France
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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La France Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 11:12 AM
Kim, congratulations on your Third Place win in my B Forms contest ~
Rodrigues Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 3:29 PM
Thank you
Goldsmith Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 8:52 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a creative story/write. Yes, take a bow. Have a blessed day with your win...............
Rodrigues Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 9:10 AM
Thank you!
Evans Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 8:20 AM
Lovely. I like the ending, it took courage!
Rodrigues Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 9:10 AM
Thank you!
Alex Avatar
January 10, 2022 at 8:34 PM
Great depiction of butterfly in Burlesque form. Whole poem is very beautiful. Congratulations!
Rodrigues Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 6:08 AM
Thank you so much…butterfly kisses ~
Poet Avatar
January 10, 2022 at 5:14 PM
Congratulations on your superb well- deserved win. You penned an exquisite poem full of great thoughts metaphors.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 6:08 AM
Thank you, Lasaad!
Bayles Avatar
January 1, 2022 at 2:52 PM
Very imaginative. I like it.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 6:08 AM
Thanks, Mike!
George Avatar
December 31, 2021 at 7:39 PM
You have amusingly described the dance of the butterfly in tutu. This poem has a great visual effect Kim ....
Rodrigues Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 6:08 AM
Thank you, Valsa!
Callus Avatar
December 31, 2021 at 6:55 AM
That was very enjoyable, Kim...and I love how it ended! ~ Best wishes for the New Year!! // paul
Rodrigues Avatar
December 31, 2021 at 7:51 AM
Thank you, Paul! Happy New Year! :)
Brown Avatar
December 30, 2021 at 1:08 PM
Hello!Kim I found this poem quite entertaining. Trying to imagine a butterfly in a tutu made me laugh. Great story, Debra.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 31, 2021 at 7:51 AM
Thank you, Debra!
Buhagiar Avatar
December 29, 2021 at 12:31 AM
I'm trying to imagine a butterfly in a tutu. Great burlesque. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 29, 2021 at 7:25 AM
Hugs to you, dear friend! ~
Roper Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 10:10 PM
Cute verse, Kim. Good luck in the contest. Happy New Year Wishes.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 29, 2021 at 7:24 AM
Thank you! Happy New Year!
Buehler Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 6:04 PM
Exciting, fun and lovely, Kim. This is a fave for me. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 6:23 PM
Thank you, Evelyn!
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