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For Your Choice f Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

Butterfly, 'tis plain to see we are enchanted, so, with thee. You inspire us to write poetry. "You are beautiful", I say and sigh. That we love you, it's no wonder why. Yet, when I see the way you fly, I ask, "Is too much nectar like wine?" You do not fly in a straight line, my dear insectoid Frankenstein.

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Date: 5/12/2025 12:31:00 PM
very very nice.....goodt vork man.....len
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David Crandall
Date: 5/12/2025 6:35:00 PM
Thanks len, I guess you can see I tried to map this butterfly's flight path.
Date: 5/12/2025 10:52:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your fun "Butterflight" write. "Good Luck" Have a wonderful day/week writing away...........
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David Crandall
Date: 5/12/2025 6:35:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed it, Paula. Have fun writing away!

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