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Butterflies, Honeysuckle Breezes and Poetry

Butterflies, Honeysuckle Breezes and Poetry I try, I swear I try, but you are always there, touching my thoughts with wonder, bringing desires to my mind on endless wishes cast upon continuous ripples, rapidly forming with every breath I take Evening brings the sunset in multicolored shades of how I feel Reaching for that lost love, floating like indigo butterflies just beyond my grasp, though I still want, with every ounce, every movement, every hope I have been told I long for what I can not have, that elusive bloom at the peak of the arbor, radiant beauty washing down upon me, fragrant reminders of a time before, when your petals gathered at my heart And try as I like it is of no use, My mind holds you, desperately dreaming in echoed whispers and twilight shadows which never seem to end For as long as there are butterflies, honeysuckle breezes and poetry… there will be you Good night Soupers Have a great weekend Thanks for all of the kindness you have shown me

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Date: 9/28/2017 12:34:00 PM
How can I find words fine enough to tell you about the effect your poem has had on me. It is a lace mantilla of beautiful words that drape across my mind.
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Date: 9/20/2017 6:04:00 AM
Just a beautifully breezy, fragrant poem! Loved it, especially the line ..."that elusive bloom at the peak of the arbor".
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Date: 7/25/2017 3:07:00 PM
Chris I just pressed upon your poem On the side bar,just finished reading your poem. All I can say is wow!!!! Have a great day my frind Peace and love.
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Chris Green
Date: 7/28/2017 3:05:00 PM
Thank you Darlene
Date: 7/17/2017 2:51:00 PM
I love the love and imagery you conjur with your pen my friend. Always xomo
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Chris Green
Date: 7/17/2017 3:03:00 PM
And I love the lovely things you always say to me in your comments. :) Thanks my friend.
Date: 7/17/2017 6:33:00 AM
Good Morning Chris. This is more than lovely and more than fine poetry with such poetic expressions that are solid. Have a wonderful morning. Well done in its entirety
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Chris Green
Date: 7/17/2017 8:29:00 AM
Thank you so very much my friend for saying such nice things to me all of the time. I truly do appreciate your friendship.
Date: 7/16/2017 2:45:00 PM
you make me drool, chris... with butterflies , breezes, and poetry, love abounds... very nice!..huggs
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Chris Green
Date: 7/17/2017 8:29:00 AM
Thank you my friend for always being so nice to me. I appreciate you Nette
Date: 7/15/2017 3:25:00 PM
The spiritual beauty of whomever the love was or is in your life cascades across the pages of your poetry like jasmine breezes caressing the skin... I see in you a gentle soul dear poet
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Chris Green
Date: 7/17/2017 8:28:00 AM
Thank you Frederic, that is such a nice thing to say. It is amazing how love can paint the world before your eyes in the most vibrant colors and scenes.
Date: 7/15/2017 3:16:00 PM
So agree with Dale's comment, how do you write so many wonderful words that spread beauty and love everyday? Astounding Chris.
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Chris Green
Date: 7/17/2017 8:27:00 AM
Read my reply to Dale. :) Thank you Elizabeth for your wonderful words about my poetry
Date: 7/15/2017 12:14:00 PM
This is a beautiful poem Chris, what I like about your poems are that they flow so well and the imagery is always so brilliant.. You are a great asset to the site.
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Chris Green
Date: 7/17/2017 8:27:00 AM
Thank you so very much Silent One for your kind thoughts.
Date: 7/15/2017 7:27:00 AM
In a world full of abundance, I really dont think that anything is elusive. I'm always of the belief that for each door that closes another always opens. Now about the poem itself, it is beautiful as always. How you come up with all these beautiful lines is beyond my comprehension my friend....Maria
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Chris Green
Date: 7/17/2017 8:26:00 AM
Thank you so very much Maria. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one.
Date: 7/15/2017 5:12:00 AM
Hi Chris, wishing you a lovely weekend, you're so kind, you never forget to wish us good morning, good night and happy weekend:) love your poetry with 'honeysuckle breezes':)
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Chris Green
Date: 7/17/2017 8:26:00 AM
Thank you so very much Jo for always being so kind to me too. I appreciate you my friend.
Date: 7/15/2017 3:48:00 AM
YOU my dear friend, have a great weekend. It's not elusive btw. Keep dreaming and keep hoping. It's what makes life worth living. See you on Monday.
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Chris Green
Date: 7/17/2017 8:25:00 AM
Thanks so much Darren for always being so kind to me
Date: 7/14/2017 7:45:00 PM
What amazes me is that every day you continue to produce these long, graceful verses. I can't even imagine.
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Chris Green
Date: 7/17/2017 8:25:00 AM
Yeah, I eat a lot of strawberry shortcake with whipped cream. It helps. :) Thanks so much my friend.
Date: 7/14/2017 6:42:00 PM
I knew I would find something beautiful tonight! Sweet dreams....
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Chris Green
Date: 7/17/2017 8:24:00 AM
Thanks so very much my friend, I am happy you liked it
Date: 7/14/2017 6:41:00 PM
So romantic! <3 You create lovely images in this poem, Chris :) Have a wonderful weekend!
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Chris Green
Date: 7/17/2017 8:24:00 AM
Thank you Sara for your kind words.
Date: 7/14/2017 6:08:00 PM
This is a beautiful poem to end the day with. I absolutely love it Chris :) Take care. Have a nice weekend !
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Chris Green
Date: 7/17/2017 8:24:00 AM
Thank you so very much Heidi.
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