Butterflies, Honeysuckle Breezes and Poetry

Butterflies, Honeysuckle Breezes and Poetry I try, I swear I try, but you are always there, touching my thoughts with wonder, bringing desires to my mind on endless wishes cast upon continuous ripples, rapidly forming with every breath I take Evening brings the sunset in multicolored shades of how I feel Reaching for that lost love, floating like indigo butterflies just beyond my grasp, though I still want, with every ounce, every movement, every hope I have been told I long for what I can not have, that elusive bloom at the peak of the arbor, radiant beauty washing down upon me, fragrant reminders of a time before, when your petals gathered at my heart And try as I like it is of no use, My mind holds you, desperately dreaming in echoed whispers and twilight shadows which never seem to end For as long as there are butterflies, honeysuckle breezes and poetry… there will be you Good night Soupers Have a great weekend Thanks for all of the kindness you have shown me
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Cresswell Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 12:34 PM
How can I find words fine enough to tell you about the effect your poem has had on me. It is a lace mantilla of beautiful words that drape across my mind.
Rodd Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 6:04 AM
Just a beautifully breezy, fragrant poem! Loved it, especially the line ..."that elusive bloom at the peak of the arbor".
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July 25, 2017 at 3:07 PM
Chris I just pressed upon your poem On the side bar,just finished reading your poem. All I can say is wow!!!! Have a great day my frind Peace and love.
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July 28, 2017 at 3:05 PM
Thank you Darlene
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July 17, 2017 at 2:51 PM
I love the love and imagery you conjur with your pen my friend. Always xomo
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July 17, 2017 at 3:03 PM
And I love the lovely things you always say to me in your comments. :) Thanks my friend.
Ricci Avatar
July 17, 2017 at 6:33 AM
Good Morning Chris. This is more than lovely and more than fine poetry with such poetic expressions that are solid. Have a wonderful morning. Well done in its entirety
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July 17, 2017 at 8:29 AM
Thank you so very much my friend for saying such nice things to me all of the time. I truly do appreciate your friendship.
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July 16, 2017 at 2:45 PM
you make me drool, chris... with butterflies , breezes, and poetry, love abounds... very nice!..huggs
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July 17, 2017 at 8:29 AM
Thank you my friend for always being so nice to me. I appreciate you Nette
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July 15, 2017 at 3:25 PM
The spiritual beauty of whomever the love was or is in your life cascades across the pages of your poetry like jasmine breezes caressing the skin... I see in you a gentle soul dear poet
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July 17, 2017 at 8:28 AM
Thank you Frederic, that is such a nice thing to say. It is amazing how love can paint the world before your eyes in the most vibrant colors and scenes.
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July 15, 2017 at 3:16 PM
So agree with Dale's comment, how do you write so many wonderful words that spread beauty and love everyday? Astounding Chris.
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July 17, 2017 at 8:27 AM
Read my reply to Dale. :) Thank you Elizabeth for your wonderful words about my poetry
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July 15, 2017 at 12:14 PM
This is a beautiful poem Chris, what I like about your poems are that they flow so well and the imagery is always so brilliant.. You are a great asset to the site.
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July 17, 2017 at 8:27 AM
Thank you so very much Silent One for your kind thoughts.
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July 15, 2017 at 7:27 AM
In a world full of abundance, I really dont think that anything is elusive. I'm always of the belief that for each door that closes another always opens. Now about the poem itself, it is beautiful as always. How you come up with all these beautiful lines is beyond my comprehension my friend....Maria
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July 17, 2017 at 8:26 AM
Thank you so very much Maria. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one.
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July 15, 2017 at 5:12 AM
Hi Chris, wishing you a lovely weekend, you're so kind, you never forget to wish us good morning, good night and happy weekend:) love your poetry with 'honeysuckle breezes':)
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July 17, 2017 at 8:26 AM
Thank you so very much Jo for always being so kind to me too. I appreciate you my friend.
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July 15, 2017 at 3:48 AM
YOU my dear friend, have a great weekend. It's not elusive btw. Keep dreaming and keep hoping. It's what makes life worth living. See you on Monday.
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July 17, 2017 at 8:25 AM
Thanks so much Darren for always being so kind to me
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July 14, 2017 at 7:45 PM
What amazes me is that every day you continue to produce these long, graceful verses. I can't even imagine.
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July 17, 2017 at 8:25 AM
Yeah, I eat a lot of strawberry shortcake with whipped cream. It helps. :) Thanks so much my friend.
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July 14, 2017 at 6:42 PM
I knew I would find something beautiful tonight! Sweet dreams....
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July 17, 2017 at 8:24 AM
Thanks so very much my friend, I am happy you liked it
Ella Avatar
July 14, 2017 at 6:41 PM
So romantic! <3 You create lovely images in this poem, Chris :) Have a wonderful weekend!
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July 17, 2017 at 8:24 AM
Thank you Sara for your kind words.
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July 14, 2017 at 6:08 PM
This is a beautiful poem to end the day with. I absolutely love it Chris :) Take care. Have a nice weekend !
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July 17, 2017 at 8:24 AM
Thank you so very much Heidi.
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