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Butter Fly

Butter Fly the butter ~* *~ * * * * fly that flied away that broke the heart that put to skids the board on skates the kid o \ / p q \o o/ ~ ~ ~ ~ his head in the clouds ~ ~ ~ \ * / * \ * /~ ~ ~ he skates away … he forgets … for his grandmother this butter fly’s under lock and key

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Date: 8/2/2025 8:33:00 AM
Very endearing, well done! Interesting form. It does add to the dynamic of the poetry.
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Date: 8/2/2025 8:05:00 AM
Nicely done!
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Date: 8/2/2025 3:04:00 AM
Very ingenious and interesting ! Great shape poem. All the Best, if it is for a contest.
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Date: 8/1/2025 9:02:00 PM
Very cute. One little part I couldn't figure out . The kid did what?
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/1/2025 9:51:00 PM
It is supposed to look like a kid :)
Date: 8/1/2025 8:45:00 PM
Dear Kim, your poem is creative, visually appealing and expressed so poetically. Enjoyed! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 8/1/2025 5:57:00 PM
Big Butter! He is in my view! Very enjoyed read lovely Kim! A favorite ;-)
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Date: 8/1/2025 5:27:00 PM
Very creative with the shaping of your words in this one Kim. No one will suspect AI here. LOL I like it, my friend. Good luck in the contest (if a contest poem). Bill
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Date: 8/1/2025 3:45:00 PM
clever and creative, Kim. Good job, hugs, Sara
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Date: 8/1/2025 2:08:00 PM
Creative work. I wonder what this child is up to. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/1/2025 2:12:00 PM
Thank you, Sara!
Date: 8/1/2025 1:57:00 PM
All rather charming, Kim. :) john
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/1/2025 2:12:00 PM
Thank you, John!

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