Butter Cup Row

I remember a good day not so long ago
When I had in fact escaped the show
Adrift with magical mushrooms in tow

I set out for the woods where life is slow
A two hour hike four miles as fly the crow
Sat down where tall grass and daises grow 

Trees spoke in a language few will ever  know
A mosquito landed and asked me friend or foe
The joke was on him; he’ll peek in a minute or so

I looked where the tall grass and the daises grow
And saw a curious looking bird who said  to go
“Your kinds not welcome here on Butter Cup Row”

I'm not like all the other humans anymore you know
“You’ll need to prove it and don’t try bribing me with doe”
So atop the daisy next to him my inner-child began to show



Montage Meltdown 
Contest Judged:  4/7/2011 	 

Sponsored by: Robb A. Kopp 

 	Placed 2nd

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 4/8/2011 3:41:00 AM
Ah!!!! Great story Edwin. Such an imagination you have. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie
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Date: 4/8/2011 12:36:00 AM
That idea Buttercup Row is just darling! Congrats on your big win, Edwin. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 4/7/2011 10:01:00 PM
Many congrats Edwin for this win. It is such a lovely tale.
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Date: 4/7/2011 3:13:00 PM
so cute!!! Gotta loved the ha lucy gent ICK! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 4/7/2011 11:14:00 AM
Congratulations Edwin on your 2nd place win.Nice rhyming flow, exquisite write...Gautami
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Date: 4/7/2011 8:21:00 AM
Congrats Edwin on your 2nd place win in Robb's contest of Montage Meltdown luv.. a great write and wonderful win..enjoy my friend with luv...
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Date: 4/7/2011 8:13:00 AM
What a delightful poem you wrote for that picture.....this is a gem!! Congratulations, Eddwin...so well deserved!!
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Date: 4/7/2011 8:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Robb's contest Edwin. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/7/2011 7:14:00 AM
Congratulations on the second place in the contest of Robb, Edwin
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Date: 3/17/2011 9:18:00 AM
I guess the animals only speak to us when we have magical mushrooms, Edwin. I love the whimsical feel of this write and enjoyed seeing your inner child emerge. If this is for a contest, you know I'm always pulling for you to win. Love, Carolyn
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