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But o, But o Comically wrong almost from the get-go. Lanky, legs coil a foot, soon green not normal a pile to be swept, damaged and labeled. Its thin contoured face, noise sound effects rather than words, his mind a mystery still sweet, but without a label. 12/28/2017

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Date: 1/22/2018 6:36:00 PM
I see Harry saying good luck in the contest but I can't think which contest this one was for. I sure enjoyed this cute little poem and the pictures you put with it, Eve.
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Date: 1/22/2018 6:52:00 PM
This was not for a contest, Andrea. I think he was talking about the cans contest.. which I didn't make it...
Date: 12/29/2017 4:51:00 PM
Interesting Poetry Eve, love your entry, good luck in the contest, Happy New Year.
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Date: 12/29/2017 9:06:00 AM
An interesting way of describing a person... I do not know who this is about, but none of us come with a label, yet some are more transparent than others.. Well expressed Eve and good luck in the contest..
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