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But For You

. Yesss I was the child I smile yes i can you fathom I The first of mine remember was the pen The first lexis i followed by you Mine first brush not for the likes of i yet you

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 7/7/2012 11:13:00 AM

Beautiful progession from self to the other! Enchanting verse that resonates ! Love, Elizabeth

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 5/24/2009 12:29:00 PM

Another well written. Should I be surprised? I edited too, 19 in my eyeS. ;)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/21/2009 2:18:00 AM

i love your style-mine first brush not for likes of me but for likes of you--this shows part of your character--not selfish,first comes she,that is love---wonderful--charma

L'Nass Shango

Date: 5/20/2009 11:07:00 AM

We investigate personal landscapes of memory, my friend, no one knows like us ... and yet we see it anew just writing about it ... and how it leans hard upon the power of our love. Great write again.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/19/2009 10:59:00 AM

How wonderful to have such inspiration, James. This is beautiful! Hope you send or post some photos of Noah. Please let me know if you do so I can check your blog and see them. Love, Carolyn

Christopher Higgins

Date: 5/19/2009 9:37:00 AM

I can feel some power in these words...not written delicatley but with force..strong voice.