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But, Failed At the Time

I am searching a sweet color a soft pen and an art paper to draw a picture of Sound but, failed all the time In honor of: Michael J. Falotico

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/25/2012 10:22:00 AM

impressively creative thought bl and penning a sound is rather difficult but u are so talented u will succeed eventually .. so good to hear from u my friend.. luv and happy weekend..

Kevin Clark

Date: 2/23/2012 6:14:00 PM

Very creative I like this one.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/22/2012 8:00:00 AM

I am stopping by to thank you so much for your kind comments on my poetry. I enjoyed reading yours today. Have a wonderful day and please continue sharing your poetry BL. Love, Carol

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/21/2012 6:04:00 AM

very clever poem, this is Bl, enjoyed. harry

Kim Merryman

Date: 2/20/2012 7:51:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your creative poem, BL. Love, Kim

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/20/2012 5:23:00 PM

I like this one, BL. Imaginative.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/20/2012 2:04:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this afternoon..If for a contest, reads like winning material..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/20/2012 2:05:00 PM

Soup mail soon..Sara