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Busted

I was driving and crossed over the line
Intoxicated with lust, and half blind
You see, I was out on a date
We'd had drinks and it was getting late

I had one hand on the wheel
The other completely concealed
Lost in a fuzzy sweater
Looking for something better

She was nibbling on my ear
I was in the stratosphere
Realizing they were real
Mashed the gas copping a feel

Now to me that light looked yellow
I swear I didn't see that fellow
Just as he stepped from the curb
She grabbed my shifter, that's when I swerved

All I heard was a thump
Yeah there was a slight bump
Before I could get out of sight
In the rear view I saw blue lights

We turned in to the nearest drive
About that time she took a dive
Right when beauty saw the beast
Busted by the dream police


   an original poem by the "poemdog" Daniel Turner

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/4/2016 10:52:00 AM
Glad it was the dream police...You do these rhymes so effortlessly.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 4/4/2016 12:37:00 PM
Thank you Tim for the flattering compliment. I really enjoy your friendly visits. Peace my friend:)
Date: 4/3/2016 11:47:00 AM
Hi DT, I was cheering until the last line. Still I envy you..... Pashang
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Daniel Turner
Date: 4/3/2016 12:58:00 PM
It was all for fun! Thanks for dropping by. Peace my friend:)
Date: 4/2/2016 7:26:00 AM
Brilliant Daniel, certainly made me smile, a great poem
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Daniel Turner
Date: 4/2/2016 7:44:00 AM
Thank you, Gail. I appreciate your friendly comments and your kind visits. Peace my friend:)
Date: 4/1/2016 8:55:00 PM
Just recently? ;-) Fun read! Well done.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 4/1/2016 9:07:00 PM
Happens to me all of the time. Thanks I appreciate you droppin in. Peace my friend and have a great weekend:):)
Date: 4/1/2016 6:47:00 PM
ohh, but you really delight, daniel.. splendid read!..huggs
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Daniel Turner
Date: 4/1/2016 7:20:00 PM
Had you going for a minute though didn't I? I appreciate your friendly visits and comments. Peace my friend:):)
Date: 4/1/2016 6:46:00 PM
Very good , but I am a little fuzzy on some details. For example was she wearing a fuzzy sweater? Real what? Why was she grabbing the gear stick? Could you explain? And were you the beauty, beast or neither? Don't forget you're innocent when you dream Daniel.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 4/1/2016 7:19:00 PM
Jean, when I think of innocent, you're the last person that comes to mind. Peace you naughty girl:):)
Date: 4/1/2016 4:21:00 PM
LOL! my friend..I not a fan of those lights :) with Sweet rhyme you tell an awesome story *8....peace, jill
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Daniel Turner
Date: 4/1/2016 7:17:00 PM
Thank you Jill. I'm glad I made you smile. Peace my friend:)
Date: 4/1/2016 4:10:00 PM
Fabulous humour and great rhyme Daniel:-) hugs Jan xx
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Daniel Turner
Date: 4/1/2016 7:17:00 PM
Thank you Jan. I'm glad I made you smile. Peace my friend:)

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