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Bushmills In Bus Station

Her hair's so black, the blue is breaking through. Centre-parted with furrow crown to fore, Perfectly placed and kept in position as pretty red ribbons bind the bunches. Her face is crazed and tanned to leather. Too many benders on Benidorm beach. Her mouth is creased from too many decades of dragging long and hard on king-size tipped. But her lips: Aah! A work of art in crimson. Today she wears a short-sleeve summer frock. Floral pattern with red to match her lippy. Her batwings flap-flop like Labrador ears. Her small white socks sit snug in hiking boots. She is the little girl in the old lady. Time corrupts. Her comfort, her addiction. After her tour of town she sidles off to swig Bushmills on a bus-station bench. Guess who must help to carry her back home.

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Date: 4/13/2019 8:55:00 AM
Cute one. LOL..Today the younger ones put blue onto black hair to make it look blue-black. Sara
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Tony Hargreaves
Date: 4/21/2019 1:46:00 PM
Hi Sara. Many thanks for your comment. Yes, it seems there is a kind of black that comes out of the blue. Best wishes. Tony
Date: 11/27/2018 12:56:00 PM
Excellent piece, Tony, very involving.
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Date: 11/26/2018 10:57:00 AM
I love this line "she is the little girl in the old lady"- perfect-o!
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