Buses 16, 38 or 133

The thing I do to be nearer to him,
Commuting even in weather so grim.
The things I do to have more acceptance,
Cleaning his home for a much better chance.

The bus I go northbound in drives down memory lane,
As I reminisce about what he and I once were, in silent pain.
The bus I go eastbound with shows me where he's recently been,
As I daydream of a future wish I deeply hold within.

The commute may not always feel worth it,
But I want to show him I love him every bit.
The way home always fills me with sorrow,
But I always know there is another tomorrow.

The things I do for him, despite coming and going,
It is because it is him whom I will never stop loving.
The things I go through for him doesn't make him obligated,
But the least I hope for is my love is one day reciprocated.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Duraiswami  Avatar
November 12, 2024 at 9:25 PM
Beautiful poetry, so touching! You have captured such deep emotions in a unique way! Absolutely amazing! God bless you always!
Cunningham Avatar
June 22, 2024 at 10:08 PM
Very romantic verse Marissa, congrats to you on today's POTD honour. Tom
Wolf Avatar
June 22, 2024 at 8:22 PM
Congrats on POTD. And I'm with you: He should at least reciprocate. Let him take three buses! :) gw
Rodgers Avatar
June 22, 2024 at 7:35 PM
Dear Marissa, your words are like the buses you ride—each one carrying a piece of your heart. Your love, persistence, and hope shine through every line. Congrats my Friend for POTD. - Blessings, Daniel
Kitchin Avatar
June 22, 2024 at 4:32 PM
Marissa, nicely penned, congratulations on POTD.
Hind Avatar
June 22, 2024 at 4:01 PM
Aw, I wish the best for you, he's lucky to have you... :) enjoyed reading
Nicole Avatar
June 22, 2024 at 3:24 PM
The things we do, just to be that close. This is beautiful, tender and emotional, all at the same time. Your thoughts caress gently around me and my heart. Congratulations Marissa, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
Goldsmith Avatar
June 22, 2024 at 8:17 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your romantic write. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away............................
Greenhough Avatar
June 22, 2024 at 7:38 AM
I enjoyed this poem. It is romantic, and do I sense shades of Scarlett O'Hara in the remorseful longing? Tomorrow is another day. Congratulations on POTD.
Bell Avatar
June 22, 2024 at 6:53 AM
They do say buses come in threes, but I'm not sure if love comes that way too. Great POTD.
Delaney Avatar
June 22, 2024 at 4:28 AM
Marissa: You have epitomized unconditional love in this sweet POTD. May you find fulfillment in every way. SuZ
Williams Avatar
June 22, 2024 at 3:33 AM
Beautifully written. Congratulations on your POTD honours...Maria
Jones Avatar
June 22, 2024 at 1:09 AM
Aw it’s melancholy yet hopeful. Love is kind and sweet like your poem. Congratulations on your potd honor.
Edmonds  Avatar
June 22, 2024 at 12:56 AM
A beautiful poem Marissa. Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Beryl
blegh Avatar
June 20, 2024 at 8:08 PM
luvv! the feelings knotted up and entwined embellish this poem. i feel like i can almost grasp the emotions being portrayed, a very enchanting feeling.
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