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Bus Time

The weekly bus that carries
the old ones from the village
to do their weekly shop
fills with shaken umbrellas
and eager tales of morbidity.

   You know those water tablets
   that Jane’s been taking for her blood?
   Well they’ve affected her kidneys now,
   and she’s got oedema.
   You should see her ankles:
   like balloons, they are.

The rain has stopped, the sun
dazzles the seats around me,
warming the air and our faces;
beads glisten down the windows;
the driver hums a tune;
the journey smiles.

   Janet found a growth –
   it turned out benign but
   she fell and broke her wrist.
   I’m doing her shopping.
   And as for Billy’s verruca . . . Well!

The sun has failed to shun
the cloudy conversation,
gives up, ushers back the rain.
Rain is happy here: cheer is so obviously
no substitute for this bus-time babble.
Sickness over health is preferred.

I push my earphones further in,
crank up the volume and enjoy
that radio hospital drama
I downloaded yesterday.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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February 21, 2022 at 3:41 AM
Well, I'm glad I caught this bus. Why hasn't this had any Poetry Soup passengers until now? I sometimes don't get the PS timetables - this is a classic snapshot of British life in Free Verse. Alan Bennett could easily have been sitting in one of those bus seats and listening in too. Read you soon. Cheers - Gary
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