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Cold shivers taunt my spine, chattering teeth count winter’s cadence as I await sunrise watching the high wire sparrows swaying in the frigid breezes. Headlights pick their way through swirling snow. The school bus driver scowls as we linger. ©2/15/2022 E Forms – Etheree – Poetry Contest

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Date: 2/27/2022 3:37:00 PM
This is marvelous; it makes me want to try this style myself.
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Date: 2/21/2022 6:24:00 AM
Hi John, I echo what Janice said. Congratulations on your winning write. Have a nice day-Alexis
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Date: 2/20/2022 1:25:00 PM
John, congratulations on your Fourth Place win in my E Forms - Etheree contest with your poem, I love it ~Constance
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Date: 2/15/2022 7:30:00 PM
brrr! so glad I did not have to go thru that but it's no wonder the bus driver scowls... :)
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Date: 2/15/2022 1:40:00 PM
Sent shivers down my spine, nice etheree. Thank you for visiting! Robert
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Date: 2/15/2022 12:30:00 PM
Nice etheree... great subject..
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