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Burried Soul

Disgust, abhor and frown has burried me deep down, "Black Black", they call me so, whenever they try to show me low! If this is the world, where shall I go? Has has my complexion brought me no friends but all foe? With these burning eyes, I have seen, how happy and pleased they have been, when that white boy, joined their team; their response to me was clean... They threw me out right then, tearing my heart apart; shattering my spleen! Disgust, abhor and frown has burried me deep down, "Black Black", they call me so, to prove me worthless and low, not only did they dismantle my feelings, they also burried my soul...

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Beata Agustin

Date: 3/12/2024 5:05:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Sohrab Rustom

Date: 10/12/2017 10:28:00 PM

welcome to the world of poetry. we eagerly waiting for piece of poems like this. if you get time, make visit my wall for a while.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/7/2016 1:27:00 AM

JAIMA, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 11/11/2015 11:29:00 PM

:) SKAT

Tasmina Hayat Khan

Date: 9/13/2015 10:50:00 AM

Hi Jaima! Loved to read your poetry and that's the spirit you should continue with while you write. Feeling better to get such beautiful writing from my country's poetess, I want to be your friend!

Iris E. S-Lewis

Date: 4/1/2015 10:55:00 AM

Keep writing my Soup friend. This poem is sad, yet it is a telling piece addressing something that needs cleansing. Welcome, and don't stop sharing your creations. Peace and blessings.

Skat A

Date: 5/15/2014 8:47:00 AM

HI JAIMA, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/10/2014 7:42:00 AM

Jaima, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Jaima Jahan
Date: 5/11/2014 6:18:00 AM

Thank you so much! :D

Jaima Jahan

Date: 5/10/2014 1:59:00 AM

Thank you both! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/9/2014 3:09:00 PM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Jaima :) - I choose your first moving and well written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jaima Jahan
Date: 5/10/2014 2:00:00 AM

Thank you so much! :D

Faye Gibson

Date: 5/9/2014 12:05:00 PM

Hello, Jaima. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I hope you find much encouragement here. Keep writing.

Jaima Jahan
Date: 5/10/2014 2:01:00 AM

Thanks for the appreciation! :)