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Burnt Papers

I sit in front of the fireplace, in a house empty and cold; I throw in another waded up piece of paper from a box all tattered and old. The flames consume the paper, like the hundred pieces it did before, from love letters that she wrote me, before my heart, in half, she tore. I sit in front of the fireplace; one last piece of paper in my hand - it is the marriage certificate that goes along with my golden band. I sit in front of the fireplace; the box, now empty, like the house; the papers now are burnt and gone – no more evidence I had a spouse.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/4/2012 7:39:00 PM
Wow, i can see why you got a big 1st. Congrats. BG
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Date: 3/4/2012 1:51:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Date: 3/3/2012 11:11:00 AM
I had to come back and read this one again..I also wanted to see what other readers tho't. The standing ovation continues...if u ever write a book, this should be your featured poem and/or title. G.
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Date: 3/3/2012 5:45:00 AM
Congratulations Joe a powerful picture you have oainted with your words xx
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Date: 3/2/2012 8:52:00 PM
Very sad Joe. I hope it is not your life. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/2/2012 4:45:00 PM
Joe, wonderful work. The flow is incredible. I really enjoyed this. Congrats on winning Susan's contest.....................S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 3/2/2012 2:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your win and thanks for supporting my contest! powerful ending :)
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Date: 3/2/2012 1:11:00 PM
Howdy Mr. Flach! This is an epic example of your fine writing talent! It depicts as deep emotional moment in time and flows like silk! The title was carefully chosen and doesn't give the poem away too much! Truthfully, I can' t chose one stanza that I prefer over another! The whole poem is phenom! A standing ovation to a wonderful poem and poet!! Gwendolen
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Date: 3/2/2012 10:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Susan's "Paper Or Plastic" contest Joe. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/2/2012 8:46:00 AM
Congratulations. Good thing you chose paper, if you had burned that much plastic the fumes would have over powered you and the ending would have been even sadder. Mike
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Date: 3/2/2012 8:34:00 AM
A heart-breaker, the pain reads between each line of this poem. You give the reader a feeling of breaking of the heart. Well done, Joe.
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Date: 3/2/2012 7:34:00 AM
great poem! you've told a sad story in a wonderfully rhyming way. congrats on your win!
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Date: 2/21/2012 11:30:00 AM
You can feel the anguish in this one....great job!
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Date: 2/21/2012 6:50:00 AM
excellent pen joe!
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Date: 2/20/2012 8:14:00 PM
Oh!...A cold fire ya got burning there.Nice write.
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