Burnt Offerings

Burnt toast horizons singe the autumn sky.
Cinnamon swirls smoke the golden hour,
awaiting the drizzled frosting of ashen night.
Pluck the taunt string of barren branch.
Whip the laggard moonlight white.

Bring forth the banshee’s breath.
Scorch the sockets of pumpkin
impaled in fallow fields.
“Gather, Oh come! Ye ghosts
beneath the apple tree."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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November 10, 2010 at 6:22 AM
Yes, a new metaphysics fallows here, and this is the role of the poet to create. Good write
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October 31, 2010 at 11:27 PM
I loved reading from you. Thank you for commenting on my poem. HJ
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October 29, 2010 at 11:08 AM
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