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Match, Flame, Smoke, Matchstick, Lighter

I reminisce my youth, my innocence and strange relationships in the world. My mother said….. “You want to see a match burn twice,” I said enthusiastically with all naivete “Yes.” She lit a match. She blew it out and touched my hand. “Ouch,” I said. “See. Didn’t I say it would burn twice,” she said. I wondered. Did she demonstrate this to introduce homophones? Was she trying to say I was stupid? Was she sick? I reminisce. Sometimes I miss. 3/23/2021

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Date: 4/13/2021 8:59:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Janis! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 3/24/2021 3:43:00 AM
Teaching styles, hey? Kind wishes, Kai
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Date: 3/23/2021 6:24:00 AM
Wow! Deep and evocative... emotion penned in the end. Enjoyed and wish you a win. God bless you, Love, Gina
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