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Burning Flesh Part 1

Things begin turning around and very slowly they take a nasty foreboding twist as Hell's Dragon has not breathed yet a deep burning fire melting red his eyes dripping blood upon fury and destruction pumping inside the uncontrollable fire equal to that of a thousand steamboats and only he sleeps in the dark dungeons. Chained and suffering in utter Hellfire chained in untold torment and anguish unleashed he would burn your heart no less in a flash—while scorching all to nothingness fried black from the deepest ashes falling cold silently sleeping with wings on fire and chained to love’s weakness as the dark fables say: Do Not Call Upon This Beast—He’s The Devil’s Own. Hell’s Dragon stirs inside with tongues of flames lashing with the pains of hate to strike all now leaving hottest cinders and funeral pyres a plenty it’s now the Devil’s very moment to unleash His Evil, His Demon Dragon upon the saintly and the pure and the precious doing their good works and all and unsuspecting of the malevolence awaiting them. The Devil enters afresh the earthly plane once more and releases His Dragon to inflict harm and to upset God’s celestial equation of peace, harmony, and light— bringing death, destruction, and retribution to all in its flight path while breathing out the harshest and cruelest and hottest flames of fiery perfidy in the name of Lucifer—Himself laughing boisterously at God all the while not knowing the coming angelic answer. The Almighty Lord works indeed in the most mysterious of ways and He will not let his Fallen Angel Lucifer (or “The Devil” on Earth) have His way by murdering innocents through His Dragon proxy only too willing to serve His Master to bring horrible hideous death to all of mankind who fall within its flight path and intention to inflict the most treacherous and dastardly plan of of unmitigated death and horror ever to be unleashed. Continued burning flesh 2 Liam McDaid and Gary Bateman – A Collaborated Poem, Copyright © All Rights Reserved (November 28, 2014) (Free Verse poetic format)

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Date: 12/1/2014 9:29:00 PM
What a mouthful. In the case of Satan, dramatization is necessary - I don't think any of our words could ever describe the full extent of his wickedness - but your poem was a good one. Onto part 2...
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Date: 11/29/2014 1:40:00 PM
Wow! this is a very dark and scary tale woven here between you and Gary. Satan and all that you surely went all the way to the end with this one. Good V.S. Evil. Excellent collaboration! A 7 from me to you Liam and another for Gary. Golden pen as always! Have a wonderful evening! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.
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Date: 11/28/2014 10:53:00 PM
A very scary beast is Satan. You guys showed that well!!!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/29/2014 7:46:00 AM
he sure is when he raises his head turns on love devouring with hate wonderful comment thank you kindly andrea gary was deadly on this one
Date: 11/28/2014 2:07:00 PM
WOW! Reminds me of end time events...that are upon us. I believe. Going to part two.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/28/2014 2:16:00 PM
smiling eileen just another way at looking at this world full of hate instead of love catch you on 2
Date: 11/28/2014 2:07:00 PM
WOW! Reminds me of end time events...that are upon us. I believe. Going to part two.
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Date: 11/28/2014 12:09:00 PM
I am reminded of the imagery of Revelations. Off to part two Liam.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/28/2014 12:31:00 PM
smiling richard yes a revelation wonderful comment pal see you on flip side
Date: 11/28/2014 7:24:00 AM
- Woow ....... what write ............. hurry to part 2 .......... // Anne-Lise :)
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/28/2014 12:29:00 PM
dazzling beautiful comment anne lise thank you pal heartfelt appreciated dear friend bless you have a great weeekend
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/28/2014 12:14:00 PM
remembering the old days mike might have to build you a ghost ship haunting the sea waves searching for the frog lol wonderful heartfelt comment bless you pal deeply appreciated

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