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Burning Embers

The dawn of love, so magical and new, Two bodies set aflame with burning kiss. Enchanted world, and only for the two; No other pair has ever loved like this. Young love, a wonder while its passions last, Must change its form if love's to long endure. Too soon the thrill of love, once new, is past, It should condense to essence now, more pure. At times love's embers start a blazing flame; Soon cooling down to just a lovely glow. No need for these to play a youthful game, Their dreams fulfilled as both of them now know. For though the young and foolish long for fire, The glowing embers, wiser hearts desire. 4/18//19 2019 Poetry Placement Sponsor Mark Tony

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Date: 4/21/2019 3:31:00 PM
Big congrats for you marathon win, Joyce. You deserve it for your many years of inspired poetry writing!
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Date: 4/20/2019 11:08:00 PM
Lovely poem, Joyce. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 4/20/2019 5:38:00 PM
Joyce, after 122 days, 27 contests, and 945 submitted poems, my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest has finally come to its end. Congratulations on placing 23th overall in the marathon! There is no provision to denote this in the Standard Contest other than Honorable Mention. Your participation in my contests is much appreciated. ~Mark
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Date: 7/23/2010 9:14:00 AM
Congrats Joyce on your winning poem in Debbie's contest with this lovely write.. from your inspirational piece.. enjoyed and enjoy another victory dance in the winners circle my friend.. with luv..
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Date: 7/23/2010 8:28:00 AM
What a beauty, Joyce....just as was Andrea's winning poem....poetry inspiring more beautiful poetry......how wonderful !!! Congratulations!! Love, Carrie
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Date: 7/23/2010 8:26:00 AM
Congrats on the 10th place win, Joyce
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Date: 7/20/2010 6:59:00 PM
Lovely Sonnet Joyce and good luck in the contest.. Andrea is a great inspiration to us all and an even greater friend.. her words are almost prophetic.. as yours are beautiful ...with luv..
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Date: 7/20/2010 6:41:00 AM
Your poetry was a pleasure to read today Joyce. Thank you for sharing it with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/19/2010 6:02:00 PM
well written!! enjoyed reading
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