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Burning Desire

As we watch the days slowly pass us by Our fire is still burning bright and strong The love that we share I'll never deny For together is where our hearts belong This fire started when our eyes first met A joyous event I'll always cherish Like two souls forging the perfect duet Endless hits for they shall never perish My heart races when I think of that day And even while the years have come and gone These images of you never go away Your picture my mind has already drawn Helping to fuel our eternal fire Forever burning for you, my desire 7/2/2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 7/2/2017 2:46:00 PM
This is a perfect Sonnet. I can feel it! :)
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Jeremy Smith
Date: 7/2/2017 2:49:00 PM
Thank you Heidi :) Love is a very powerful feeling!
Date: 7/2/2017 2:09:00 PM
Lovely, Jeremy! I'm running on fumes myself! Haha! Only got 2 hours sleep! You are fast mastering the sonnet, my friend!
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Jeremy Smith
Date: 7/2/2017 2:11:00 PM
Thank you for you guidance my friend :)
Date: 7/2/2017 1:51:00 PM
oh Jeremy what a beautiful romantic sonnet - keep that passion burning in your heart:-) hugs jan xx
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Jeremy Smith
Date: 7/2/2017 1:53:00 PM
Thank you so much Jan :) I will definitely try!

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