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Burning Daylight Day Lily


Hurry, hurry we are burning daylight,
      The flowers are wilting;
Mother was planting a cottage garden,
And we needed the right perennials;
Flowers durable, enduring, perpetual,
      Oh sweet dreams of flowers;
This was a journey I shared with mother,
      Daylight pours into this memory;
          That I recall vividly.

Fragrant burning daylight day lilies,
      Flowing emerald leaves;
Intense beautiful orange-yellow colors,
Trumpet shaped delicate soft blooms;
We set them in a sheltered location,
      So attractive in the shade;
They also thrive in fields growing wild,
     After mother died I took some;
          Placing them at her tomb.

Darkness turns to daylight as I recall,
      Mother's cottage garden;
Some tell me that I must let it go,
That all the time I spend grieving;
The less time I spend living my life,
      But how dear to me the memory;
Of me and mother in her garden,
      Planting burning daylight day lilies;
          With petals that sleep.


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April 14, 2015


Poetry/Verse/Burning Daylight Day Lily
Copyright Protected, ID 04-666-612-14
All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France

For the contest, Burning Daylight, 
sponsor, John  Lawless, Judged 2015

Second Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Ebbs Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 7:28 AM
Nicely Done, Congrats :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 2:29 AM
Congratulations for your fine win with this wonderful poem Constance. I am happy it was honored so highly.
Haight Avatar
May 26, 2015 at 12:26 PM
Hi BW, I've been away for 10 days, still catching up with PS! Congratulations on your fine win for your Burning Daylight poem! Hugs, Sandra
Fairbrother Avatar
May 25, 2015 at 9:11 PM
So thoughtful and well done Brocken. Cheers Kev
A   Avatar
May 25, 2015 at 5:33 PM
Hello Broken, Congratulations on your win. LOVE LINDA
A  Avatar
May 25, 2015 at 1:22 AM
Broken, Congrats on your BURNING DAYLIGHT win. SKAT
Leiser Avatar
May 24, 2015 at 7:46 PM
Beautiful images and heartfelt emotions of a precious mother that is now gone...I loved this! Congrats on your win :)
Konos Avatar
May 24, 2015 at 7:16 PM
Congratulations...you are soaring now!
Lawless Avatar
May 24, 2015 at 7:08 PM
This is a wonderful invite to a nostalgic voyage. Thank you for this one, a quite enjoyable take on "burning daylight". Thanks for playing.
Devonshire Avatar
April 25, 2015 at 2:09 PM
The color of the flower does appear to be one that burns and your description of it is beautiful. I have similar memories of working in the garden with my mother, so this will be a fave for me. You took a different approach to the contest and I hope your creativity will be rewarded with a high placement! Love, Carolyn
Devonshire Avatar
April 26, 2015 at 8:37 PM
Gladiolas are very beautiful. My grandmother had them in her garden. It's so nice to know other ladies show the "flower bond" with their mothers. Each year on my mom's birthday I plant a flower for her.
Deschler Avatar
April 25, 2015 at 8:22 PM
Hi Carolyn, this poem touched me too and reminded me that it's important to create these memories with my Mom. We like to plant gladiolas in rememberance of my Grandma. They were her favorite flowers to grow.
Deschler Avatar
April 25, 2015 at 12:05 PM
My Mom and I also plant flowers together every spring... This is a lovely recalling of your precious memories. Beautifully written! Good luck in John's contest!
Devonshire Avatar
April 25, 2015 at 2:10 PM
Kelly, I guess there are many of us who share these memories in the gardens with our mothers. This poem really touched my heart!
Gifford Avatar
April 25, 2015 at 10:19 AM
Hello, And what A beautiful tribute you've written about your mother in remembering the times you shared together in the garden. So poignant and touching. Well written. A 7 rating Blessings, Darlene
Pinet Avatar
April 25, 2015 at 10:02 AM
We are captivated by nature's awesome presents and gently soothed by the quiet and splendor of the moment. We sit in that cottage garden with you and feel the magic of that experience through your words. Well written. Emile #7
Horne Avatar
April 25, 2015 at 7:43 AM
sad but absolutely beautiful, my friend x
Martin Avatar
April 24, 2015 at 10:47 PM
So very sad and so very beautiful, broken wings.
Merryman Avatar
April 24, 2015 at 10:32 PM
Beautiful, picturesque writing! I enjoyed reading your heart-warming poem. Love, Kim
Das Avatar
April 24, 2015 at 9:24 PM
This is exquisitely beautiful tinged with sadness too. Definitely 7 and a favourite. This one is a winner for sure.
Allison Avatar
April 24, 2015 at 6:44 PM
look forward to reading it:-) Hugs jan x
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