Burning Bullet

Burning Bullet

         As a aromatic substance,
 burning like a coolwater incense.
     Keeping them in suspense.
  I'm a queen I come with my own swarm of bees.
    From throwing rocks to carring glocks.
   I'm cocking my clip for the new verse that I spit.
          Tearing them apart, ripping hearts.
           Spilting heads laying them to bed.
  My mouth is like a pistol, it shoots pitiless missile's.
             You must not know about me.
            I bring the heat any where I be.
    To the left, to the left, a bullet staright to the chest.
    This is my profession, I'm the one who professes!
                       Burning Bullet...
    To true to the game, my style burning like a flame.
     Keeping it gully from beginning to the end.
                I love being empty within.
       Drop the act, you'll stay a hood rat!
 Why are you going through my fam like a photographic cam.
                I'm a burning bullet...
      Just to fantastic, personalitiy is magnetic.
            Life style is justifiable justice,
           to a journey to how I live this!
   Coming up poor, to getting rich making them feel foolish.
                 A long lived existence....
                   a burning bullet!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Robinson Jr. Avatar
July 24, 2017 at 10:13 AM
A fabulous debut poem, twanna. It got bounce and verve. Striking the nerve w/a burning lead pellet ... I love how you do, how you tell it. Powerful bio truth. Sun poetry, bright righteous as can be. Love and more love to you and yours.
Carrillo Avatar
March 12, 2013 at 8:48 PM
I see that this is your first poem. You did a great job. Thanks for sharingand for reading my poems. welcome to the Soup. Lucilla
Irisha Avatar
March 13, 2013 at 5:34 AM
Yes I wrote this a long time ago...thank you for reading. :)
Aderounmu Avatar
June 21, 2012 at 2:42 PM
Good work, great flow.Keep your pen working and the ink flowing..... Ox oX
Irisha Avatar
March 13, 2013 at 5:35 AM
Thank you :)
The Drunken Poet Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 8:42 AM
You went BROOKLYN STYLE HERE I SEE....HMMM YOUR MORE LIKE A BURNING TAMALE....
Irisha Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 10:03 AM
lmaooo!!! you silly...lol
Ink-U-Script Avatar
May 18, 2012 at 9:16 AM
Nice piece here!!
Irisha Avatar
May 18, 2012 at 12:36 PM
Thank you Pace :)
Falotico Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 3:50 PM
Excellent Poetry, your are a Poet I will now keep up with... very enjoyed.. Michael
Irisha Avatar
December 14, 2011 at 3:32 PM
wow! thank you Michael apprecate all of your comments you have posted... :)
Brown Avatar
December 1, 2011 at 12:42 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Twanna. Love, Carol
Irisha Avatar
December 5, 2011 at 11:14 AM
aww thanks :)
Stinson Avatar
November 21, 2011 at 7:30 PM
The flow of this is astounding. Good work!
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