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Burning Bullet

Burning Bullet As a aromatic substance, burning like a coolwater incense. Keeping them in suspense. I'm a queen I come with my own swarm of bees. From throwing rocks to carring glocks. I'm cocking my clip for the new verse that I spit. Tearing them apart, ripping hearts. Spilting heads laying them to bed. My mouth is like a pistol, it shoots pitiless missile's. You must not know about me. I bring the heat any where I be. To the left, to the left, a bullet staright to the chest. This is my profession, I'm the one who professes! Burning Bullet... To true to the game, my style burning like a flame. Keeping it gully from beginning to the end. I love being empty within. Drop the act, you'll stay a hood rat! Why are you going through my fam like a photographic cam. I'm a burning bullet... Just to fantastic, personalitiy is magnetic. Life style is justifiable justice, to a journey to how I live this! Coming up poor, to getting rich making them feel foolish. A long lived existence.... a burning bullet!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/24/2017 10:13:00 AM
A fabulous debut poem, twanna. It got bounce and verve. Striking the nerve w/a burning lead pellet ... I love how you do, how you tell it. Powerful bio truth. Sun poetry, bright righteous as can be. Love and more love to you and yours.
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Date: 3/12/2013 8:48:00 PM
I see that this is your first poem. You did a great job. Thanks for sharingand for reading my poems. welcome to the Soup. Lucilla
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Twanna Irisha
Date: 3/13/2013 5:34:00 AM
Yes I wrote this a long time ago...thank you for reading. :)
Date: 6/21/2012 2:42:00 PM
Good work, great flow.Keep your pen working and the ink flowing..... Ox oX
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Twanna Irisha
Date: 3/13/2013 5:35:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 6/19/2012 8:42:00 AM
You went BROOKLYN STYLE HERE I SEE....HMMM YOUR MORE LIKE A BURNING TAMALE....
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Twanna Irisha
Date: 6/19/2012 10:03:00 AM
lmaooo!!! you silly...lol
Date: 5/18/2012 9:16:00 AM
Nice piece here!!
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Twanna Irisha
Date: 5/18/2012 12:36:00 PM
Thank you Pace :)
Date: 12/6/2011 3:50:00 PM
Excellent Poetry, your are a Poet I will now keep up with... very enjoyed.. Michael
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Twanna Irisha
Date: 12/14/2011 3:32:00 PM
wow! thank you Michael apprecate all of your comments you have posted... :)
Date: 12/1/2011 12:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Twanna. Love, Carol
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Twanna Irisha
Date: 12/5/2011 11:14:00 AM
aww thanks :)
Date: 11/21/2011 7:30:00 PM
The flow of this is astounding. Good work!
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