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Burlap and Satin

I was Burlap, you were Satin your smooth against my rough, you diamond, 'gainst my red hot coal was never quite enough. You tulip in the April sun fair lady of the field me cactus, thick skinned, dominant how easily you yield. You fought till you had little left, you tore so easily, Burlap, Satin, no warp or weft were ever meant to be. February 11th 2018 For contest 'Burlap and Satin', sponsor Anthony Slausen

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Date: 3/11/2018 8:44:00 PM
A wonderful take on the theme Viv!
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Date: 3/11/2018 4:32:00 PM
Great write, Viv. This should do well. :) Loved the take you took on this theme...
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Date: 3/11/2018 8:31:00 AM
Very enjoyable poem, love the contrasts.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 3/11/2018 11:55:00 AM
Thanks, Agnes, a past relationship in twelve lines. Viv x
Date: 3/11/2018 8:12:00 AM
you always make me smile Viv...
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Viv Wigley
Date: 3/11/2018 11:55:00 AM
Thanks, Silent, appreciate the visit. Regards Viv
Date: 3/11/2018 3:29:00 AM
Fortunately not, Tom, I'd have been rocking like Captain Ahab. Thanks for droppping by. Regards, Viv
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Date: 3/11/2018 3:16:00 AM
Great rhyme Viv, I have to ask,did you compose this sitting on your NEW chair ? Good luck. Tom
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