Bunker

They hide in a secret room bunker What gives them this right? Not in the Middle-East desert, But here at home, staying out of sight New things happening, never seen before We all know, this isn’t how it works Keeping everyone hostage, To get their way, along with their perks Come on, how can anyone agree? Regardless of which side you choose This is certainly unheard of And only makes all of us lose! Heidi Sands 10/24/19

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/24/2019 5:06:00 PM

On one hand, transparency sounds ideal. On the other hand, backroom deals sometimes work out better than open forums, which tend to degenerate into shouting matches, pure bedlam... At any rate, provocative write, my friend! Thank you! Warmest wishes, Gershon

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/24/2019 7:26:00 PM

Thank you for your visit Gershon. I happen to disagree on the backroom deals. I feel we the people deserve to hear and see what is happening. I appreciate your feedback on my poem. Have a nice evening :)

Chris Green

Date: 10/24/2019 11:27:00 AM

Your words echo Heidi but sadly only to one side of the highway. This traffic jam will continue until the entire roadway crumbles under its weight, at least that is the goal.

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/24/2019 11:29:00 AM

Yes, it is unbelievable Chris! And good analogy...a big traffic jam! Thank you for your comment on this :)