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Tossed Blankets

Maudlin Crossing Dateline Morning Maudlin by a failed winter's crossing, Your heat's dateline onto the morning.

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Silent One

Date: 5/8/2024 12:30:00 PM

Nice arrangement of words dear Paige..

Ink Empress

Date: 4/30/2024 9:45:00 AM

Ah this is so creative dear paige! Ive never tried this form but looks very interesting and i love how youv written it. Brilliant flow and well woven! “ a failed winters crossing” that line stood out for me especially! Profound! Pleasure always reading your work. Hope the weather is nice there

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 4/29/2024 5:27:00 PM

you've captured the end of winter in such a wonderful manner. Not familiar with this form...you've inspired me to investigate. Enjoy your evening, hugs Sara

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 4/29/2024 4:44:00 PM

A lovely poem that warms me with the thoughts of blankets in a cold winter. I like the Tyburn style that you used that allows a lot of creativity in the mind of the reader.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 4/29/2024 6:43:00 AM

Dear Paige, I feel you encapsulated the melancholy of a winter journey's end, where warmth meets the chill of realization. I loved that the words of bundled blankets evoke physical comfort and emotional vulnerability, mirroring the complexity of human experience. I also have a sense of longing and introspection, inviting reflection on the fragile interplay between warmth and coldness in our lives. Fun to read! - Blessings, Daniel

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/29/2024 5:13:00 AM

Oh so excited you decided to write a Tyburn! I see you did your own way! Fun to see :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/28/2024 9:45:00 PM

A very cool poetry form, Paige.