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Bumped His Head

An old man walking up the steps Fell down and hit his head. We ran to help him, fearing he Was hurt or maybe dead. This happened leading to the park, The ground as hard as stone, Material to crack your skull Or maybe break a bone. The man sat up quite slowly; There was blood upon his hair. We said we’d call an ambulance; He’d suffered quite a scare. But he refused; we helped him up, Repeating we could call, For he should see a doctor After such a nasty fall. He shook his head; I’m 86 And I will be okay. We watched him as he climbed the stairs And slowly walked away. He might have a concussion And perhaps made a mistake But the ultimate decision Wasn’t one for us to make.

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Date: 2/14/2022 10:39:00 AM
you were doing the compassionate thing to both assist him and suggest further treatment... we old guys can be pretty stubborn sometimes (sometimes? lol)
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Date: 2/13/2022 9:53:00 AM
Calling an ambulance in Honolulu is an immediate cost of $1,300; 86-year-olds usually find a better way to spend their Social Security cheque - but enjoyed your poem, Ilene! Aloha!
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Date: 2/12/2022 4:23:00 PM
At 86, he’s probably an old boy from the school of hard knocks. Nowadays, a broken finger nail is a day off work. This chap probably went home to find a tie to match his blooded hair. Your poems always read like true stories, Ilene and I’m guessing they are. Always a good read. Terry
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Date: 2/12/2022 1:15:00 PM
You never know with a head injury, it's always best to get it checked out, hope he's okay. Tom
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