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Tania Kitchin, Valentine's Senryu

bumbling idiot

bumbling idiot
warms my heart with chocolates
sneezes on roses

Copyright © Kim Rodrigues | Year Posted 2026

humorvalentines daysenryu

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Andrea Dietrich

February 12, 2026 at 9:24 AM

Haha. Cute!

February 12, 2026 at 7:00 PM

Thank you!

February 10, 2026 at 3:17 AM

You made me laugh with this one. Sneezes on roses sounds like a good parody for the song, My Favorite Things on A Sound of Music (raindrops on roses). Delightful. :)

February 10, 2026 at 4:42 AM

LOL! Thanks, Jeanette!

January 31, 2026 at 12:34 PM

Kim, congratulations on your winning placement with your funny poem.

January 31, 2026 at 3:51 PM

Thank you, Tania!

January 29, 2026 at 8:07 AM

Hi Kim, I love this little slice of life piece. I once had a girlfriend who made me chocolate covered cherries; they were God awful but I had to pretend to keep the peace. God bless Anthony

January 31, 2026 at 3:51 PM

LOL! Thank you, Anthony! God bless!

January 27, 2026 at 5:27 PM

The title drew me in and the senryu doesn't disappoint!

January 28, 2026 at 2:43 AM

Thank you…lol! Glad you liked this one!

January 25, 2026 at 12:35 AM

Well He seems focused af least kim.?

January 25, 2026 at 5:29 AM

lol…the title seemed harsh but is supposed to be funny ;)

Darlene De Beaulieu

January 23, 2026 at 1:05 PM

Hello Kim, I would not accept the rose after he sneezed on it. I would enjoy the chocolate. Hugs. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu

January 24, 2026 at 10:40 AM

Hello kim, yes LOl Hugs. Darlene/

January 23, 2026 at 1:09 PM

LOL

January 22, 2026 at 5:21 PM

Weird Valentine, then- lol

January 22, 2026 at 6:33 PM

LOL! Perhaps a bit of a ner, who know…

Joseph P. DiMino

January 22, 2026 at 7:36 AM

Sounds like a man:)) Allergic to commitment.

January 22, 2026 at 8:56 AM

LOL! Love the interpretation! Perhaps the cost of both was just too much!

January 22, 2026 at 7:08 AM

so surprising indeed, like a clumsy faux pas, so enjoyable poem, thanks a lot

January 22, 2026 at 7:29 AM

lol…would certainly not be forgotten. Is he allergic to the flowers or her perfume?

January 21, 2026 at 8:38 PM

Now, Kim. He's 50% there...

January 22, 2026 at 3:37 AM

He must be cute, or she’d not written about him ;) Love oft starts with clumsiness.

January 21, 2026 at 7:16 PM

Funny!

January 22, 2026 at 3:38 AM

Thanks, Karen. Will the chocolates do it?

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