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Bumble Bees

The Bumble Bee, is to heavy to fly, but no one told it, don't ever try. So off it went, up higher, and higher, positive thinking, his strong desire. Surround yourself, with Bumble Bees, these kind of people, are the friends you need.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/2/2008 11:14:00 AM
yes we can learn a lot from the bumble bee. a very tender piece you wrote and a great message.
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Date: 8/18/2008 6:45:00 PM
You are one of the most sensible friend that one could have. Best advice I've seen on Poetry Soup!! ......God Bless...Carrie
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Date: 8/15/2008 11:03:00 AM
Christy this read possesses very sage advice, it is agreeable to surround oneself with positive thinkers and doers as well... I thank you for sharing such a very lovely free verse write. God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell
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Date: 8/15/2008 9:36:00 AM
Positive people are the keyys to a happier life. Vince
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Date: 8/15/2008 6:25:00 AM
Clever and uplifting. Don't know how those amazing positive people do it no matter what adversity they face. Well done! Love, Shar
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Date: 8/14/2008 7:16:00 PM
What a fun poem. I like the lighthearted feel. Thank you for sharing it with us. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 8/14/2008 5:28:00 PM
tenacious little fellows, hope all is well. keep writing it keeps our minds off our problems. God Bless, friends forever, R.B.
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Date: 8/14/2008 4:02:00 PM
Great advice Chrsty I so agre with your way of thinking! Laura :)
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