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Bumble Bee Stings and Singing

Bumble Bee Stings And Singing

Bee sting
Bumble is here
With fear

Fearsome 
Generating
Real pain

Painful
Targeting you
To run

Running
Faster on wind
To wait

Waiting
Then get stung
Get wet

Wetter
In water sink
Hold breath

Breathless
For bee to leave
Then pray

Praying
Bee goes away
Then rise

Rising
To see it gone
Be calm

Calmer
Than the soft wind
Then sing

Singing
Is better than
Bee stings

 
Created on 12/01/14 for- "Mussetle Train" Poetry Contest
2 4 2 non rhyming

Copyright © Earl Schumacker | Year Posted 2014

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 1/15/2015 11:35:00 PM you are welcome.. ((regarding the bottom reply)) Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 1/11/2015 9:03:00 PM Awesome win...PD Login to Reply Earl Schumacker Date: 1/12/2015 7:02:00 AM Hi Linda, Thank you for commenting. Take care. Earl

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 1/9/2015 9:51:00 PM Your poem made me smile, Earl. Congrats to you!! Hugs, Rhonda Login to Reply Earl Schumacker Date: 1/10/2015 9:07:00 AM Hi Rhonda, Thank you so much. I'm glad my little poem caused a little buzz. Singing bees make better honey. Congratulations to you too on your great poem and win in the contest. Take care. Earl

Kayod5 Kayode Date: 1/5/2015 11:53:00 PM I so much love this,congrats on the win Earl....huggs Login to Reply Earl Schumacker Date: 1/6/2015 4:43:00 AM Hi KAYOD5, Thank you so much for your kind words. Have a great day. Earl

Jan Allison Date: 1/5/2015 4:07:00 PM Dropping back with my congrats Earl :-) Hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Earl Schumacker Date: 1/5/2015 7:52:00 PM Hi Jan, Thanks! Congratulations to you too on your excellent win. Have a pleasant evening. Earl

Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/5/2015 3:46:00 PM This was fun Earl, congratulations. Login to Reply Earl Schumacker Date: 1/5/2015 7:58:00 PM Hi Richard. Yes. It was fun. Thanks for the acknowledgment. Have a pleasant evening. Earl

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 12/14/2014 7:51:00 AM do you really mean a bumble bee here only as an animal.. it seems as I read it twice and thrice it is more.. :) esp along the last 4 sets.. :)! but it's cute one.. :) Login to Reply Earl Schumacker Date: 12/14/2014 10:06:00 AM Hi Olive, Thank you so much for commenting on my poem. I'm glad you liked it. The bee is simply a bee. There are no hidden meanings here. I was accommodating the rules of the contest in this poem. Most of my other writings however have layers of meanings. Many times I like to take the entire universe and fit into one tiny atom or molecule just for fun. Have a great day. Take care. Earl

Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 12/1/2014 3:40:00 PM ??. You made me smile with this sweet poem Earl. Great job. Login to Reply Earl Schumacker Date: 12/1/2014 3:49:00 PM Hi Brenda, Thank you. This is a new 2-4-2 structured poem style created by one of our poets here. It was a fun write. Glad you enjoyed it. Earl

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 12/1/2014 3:23:00 PM Witty verse, Earl! I especially love the last stanza...hugs, Rhonda Login to Reply Earl Schumacker Date: 12/1/2014 3:58:00 PM Hi Rhonda, Thank you so much. Glad you liked it. I just stumbled upon this contest and turned it into a bumble kinda bee thingy contest. I hope there is no spelling requirements... I hate spelling bees. It is bad enough they have that stingy thingy. Have a great day. Earl

Jan Allison Date: 12/1/2014 11:39:00 AM I can relate to this write very much Earl - good luck with the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Earl Schumacker Date: 12/1/2014 1:23:00 PM Hi Jan, Glad you liked it. Stings are no fun. Singing is. I know you are busy right now and you have a lot on your mind. I just posted a poem that is suited for night time reading. I hope you can find some time to read "Attendant." It is one of my better creations. I think you will enjoy it. Take care. Earl