Bullet Train To Oblivion


Guilty pleasures
has you on a Siberian Ferris wheel,
spinning rapidly
Gulag suicidal libido
urges you to cock the trigger and squeeze
Keep repeating the nightmare:
Six torture chambers
Six gas chambers
Six motel rooms
with five vacancies
It's your last chance to exit
this cursed promiscuous existence;
but you don't beg to get off,
this is how you like to get off
Six bridal chambers
Six bed chambers
Six hotel rooms
Face the sex gun ... spin the chambers,
and watch the cowards run
You don't like to play it safe,
law abiding abstinence makes no sense to you
You love the thrill of knowing you might die
from doing something you love to do
It's the way of a sex outlaw: hell raising and guns blazing
and booties shaking in every bar and brothel
Thrill-seeking junkie cowboy,
you're gonna stay on this rough ride,
try to buck the bronco
You got big macho dreams
of being the head legs-spread honcho ...
sweating beads of lead perspiration
in the fire down below
You need amoral nerves of steel,
if you wanna partner up with the devil
Mete out to the innocent souls much ricochet suffering
Promiscuous criminality don't pay ---
Doing anything with anybody,
then giving it to everybody ...
gonna send you to your grave one day
Guilty pleasures
has sentenced you to a life riddled with
holes in your two brains
Serving time in chains of misery and pain
The destination is oblivion,
for all who board this prison bullet train

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 2/8/2017 9:51:00 AM
WoW! Freddie, What a hard hitting truthful write. I agree if one is not careful "guilty pleausures" can sentence one to a "death sentence ". A without doubt seven:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/3/2017 6:26:00 PM
Wow, RW! You sure can write my friend! Dark or light, I love it all!
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Date: 2/3/2017 1:48:00 PM
This poem has such class for such a lewd topic. Bravo.
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Date: 2/3/2017 1:02:00 PM
"Holes in your two brains" That was great, the poem is dark and a very scary picture of someone's reality, but that line is killer my friend. No pun intended.
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