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Bukowski

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-The Last Straw-

Sometimes he went too far
Shunning the sunlight, wading into the dark
swimming in places the sun couldn't find
shifting the wind to suit his own fall
speeding through life with his back to the wall
where he'd spit in the eye, and bend all the rules
yet with something to find, that was not of this world
spilling his guts 
wading through fog, feeling the chill
unfurled in a dream
that was seen through a glass
while he looked for asylum in the black of the night

Boomerang words were like bats out of hell
to dwell in the mind and rattle the bones
of someone with soul, who feels all alone
changing their world from the outside in

Students mull over his words, taking sides 
A skate on thin ice
Some call it nice........some call it sludge
slugging it out, from opposite sides

Some can't decide........ some claim to hate it

Fate has a name.  Genius I'd say
Some of us stumble, and tumble right in


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For Contest Sponsored By Amy Green 4/7/14
Genius
Resubmitted for PD's Contest: 101 in a Row #14
9/16/16

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/18/2016 1:41:00 AM
Carrie, Congratulations on your sweet win. Thank you so much for the support. Stop by my blog "CERTIFYING OLD AGE (and a baby)" if you'd like. Always & Forever..... LINDA
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Date: 4/11/2014 6:36:00 AM
Congratulations on a fine win in the Bukowski Contest, carrie
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Date: 4/11/2014 2:37:00 AM
Hi Carrie, this turned out so very well; you did your homework properly:) congrats on win :) // paul
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Date: 4/10/2014 8:02:00 PM
I always connect to the way you express yourself. Congratulations on a fine portrayal.
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Date: 4/10/2014 7:07:00 PM
You showed many perspectives in this poem, and well. Another excellent one to choose from... not going to be easy. thank you for your contribution and congrats.
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Date: 4/9/2014 4:39:00 PM
Great Write! -Juli-Michelle
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Date: 4/8/2014 3:10:00 PM
LOL GO Charles!!! It reminds me of a story, a room mate of mine a pysc major said Freud was stupid.. I said why don't you make a placard that says Nancy Waldo thinks Sigund Frued is stupid and walk around with it? See how far tht gets you ;) Of course since she was 'no one' it would get her 'no where?' Yes I'm with you Genius! L & L
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Date: 4/7/2014 10:34:00 PM
This is a perfect entry into Amy's contest my friend! This is a splendid write Carrie! I really enjoyed reading this phenomenal poem here this evening! You have delighted me with this creative write! What a lovely piece, Great work!!
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