Linda Alice Fowler Poet Rictameter

Building Tension

Building
tension from a
niggling tickle inside
my desirous heart when you stroll
through the depths of my haunted memories
in what had been then, or could be,
as I seek forgiveness, 
tension slowly
building.

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Sara Kendrick March 4, 2024 at 11:36 AM Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Thank you for sharing this one with us. What could have been, however, apparently not. Your visit to my page was uplifting. Sara K Linda Alice Fowler March 6, 2024 at 6:36 AM Thank you and you are welcome Sara. Always a pleasure! :)

Edward Ibeh March 4, 2024 at 9:10 AM Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful Rictameter, Linda:-) I loved it! Linda Alice Fowler March 4, 2024 at 10:13 AM Many thanks for your kind placement Edward. I am pleased you loved it! :)

Christuraj Alex March 1, 2024 at 8:26 PM A very beautiful poem written in the form of Rictameter. Congratulations! Linda Alice Fowler March 2, 2024 at 9:00 AM Hi Christuraj. Long time no see. Thanks for the visit and congrats! :)

Paula Goldsmith March 1, 2024 at 9:05 AM Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your powerful/wonderful "Building Tension" write with a great ending. It is always good to seek forgiveness. Love that line... Have a great/blessed day with your win..................... Linda Alice Fowler March 2, 2024 at 8:59 AM Hi Paula. I had forgotten I entered this contest. LOL. Many thanks for reminding me and a BIG congrats for your win! :)

Bj Legros Kelley March 1, 2024 at 1:10 AM 'When you stroll through the depths of my haunted memories' is such an emotive and powerful line! This is an amazing poem, and the diamond shape is beautiful as well. Linda Alice Fowler March 2, 2024 at 8:57 AM Hi Bj. You are kind with your comments. Many thanks! :)

David Kavanagh February 28, 2024 at 4:37 AM Oh I’m sure you don’t need forgiveness Linda, forgive oneself for such niggling tickles, a thought provoking poem, in a beautiful form, hope I didn’t misread the intended meaning, all the best for contest, cheers David! Linda Alice Fowler February 28, 2024 at 7:00 AM LOL David. I agree it has a couple of different meanings...I like yours! :)

Andrea Dietrich February 27, 2024 at 12:52 PM Great idea to use this form for your poem. Good luck for the contest. Linda Alice Fowler February 27, 2024 at 12:57 PM Many thanks Andrea. :)

Heidi Sands February 26, 2024 at 10:54 AM Well written Linda :) Linda Alice Fowler February 27, 2024 at 12:56 PM Hi Heidi. Hope all is well with you. Good to see you here. I always enjoy your visits! Thank you, Linda :)