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Building Tension

Building tension from a niggling tickle inside my desirous heart when you stroll through the depths of my haunted memories in what had been then, or could be, as I seek forgiveness, tension slowly building.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/4/2024 11:36:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Thank you for sharing this one with us. What could have been, however, apparently not. Your visit to my page was uplifting. Sara K

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/6/2024 6:36:00 AM

Thank you and you are welcome Sara. Always a pleasure! :)

Edward Ibeh

Date: 3/4/2024 9:10:00 AM

Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful Rictameter, Linda:-) I loved it!

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/4/2024 10:13:00 AM

Many thanks for your kind placement Edward. I am pleased you loved it! :)

Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/1/2024 8:26:00 PM

A very beautiful poem written in the form of Rictameter. Congratulations!

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/2/2024 9:00:00 AM

Hi Christuraj. Long time no see. Thanks for the visit and congrats! :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/1/2024 9:05:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your powerful/wonderful "Building Tension" write with a great ending. It is always good to seek forgiveness. Love that line... Have a great/blessed day with your win.....................

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/2/2024 8:59:00 AM

Hi Paula. I had forgotten I entered this contest. LOL. Many thanks for reminding me and a BIG congrats for your win! :)

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 3/1/2024 1:10:00 AM

'When you stroll through the depths of my haunted memories' is such an emotive and powerful line! This is an amazing poem, and the diamond shape is beautiful as well.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/2/2024 8:57:00 AM

Hi Bj. You are kind with your comments. Many thanks! :)

David Kavanagh

Date: 2/28/2024 4:37:00 AM

Oh I’m sure you don’t need forgiveness Linda, forgive oneself for such niggling tickles, a thought provoking poem, in a beautiful form, hope I didn’t misread the intended meaning, all the best for contest, cheers David!

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/28/2024 7:00:00 AM

LOL David. I agree it has a couple of different meanings...I like yours! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/27/2024 12:52:00 PM

Great idea to use this form for your poem. Good luck for the contest.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/27/2024 12:57:00 PM

Many thanks Andrea. :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/26/2024 10:54:00 AM

Well written Linda :)

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/27/2024 12:56:00 PM

Hi Heidi. Hope all is well with you. Good to see you here. I always enjoy your visits! Thank you, Linda :)

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/26/2024 8:17:00 AM

great entry for the contest, Linda. Never seen this form before, but I liked it and liked what you did with it. Also, your words were moving and captivating (loved these words: through the depths of my haunted memories)Well done...have a pleasant Monday, Sara

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/27/2024 12:58:00 PM

Thank you dear Sara. I hope our week is going well. Hello to Bill :)