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Building Tension

Building
tension from a
niggling tickle inside
my desirous heart when you stroll
through the depths of my haunted memories
in what had been then, or could be,
as I seek forgiveness, 
tension slowly
building.

Copyright © Linda Alice Fowler | Year Posted 2024

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Sara Kendrick Date: 3/4/2024 11:36:00 AM Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Thank you for sharing this one with us. What could have been, however, apparently not. Your visit to my page was uplifting. Sara K Login to Reply Linda Alice Fowler Date: 3/6/2024 6:36:00 AM Thank you and you are welcome Sara. Always a pleasure! :)

Edward Ibeh Date: 3/4/2024 9:10:00 AM Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful Rictameter, Linda:-) I loved it! Login to Reply Linda Alice Fowler Date: 3/4/2024 10:13:00 AM Many thanks for your kind placement Edward. I am pleased you loved it! :)

Christuraj Alex Date: 3/1/2024 8:26:00 PM A very beautiful poem written in the form of Rictameter. Congratulations! Login to Reply Linda Alice Fowler Date: 3/2/2024 9:00:00 AM Hi Christuraj. Long time no see. Thanks for the visit and congrats! :)

Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/1/2024 9:05:00 AM Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your powerful/wonderful "Building Tension" write with a great ending. It is always good to seek forgiveness. Love that line... Have a great/blessed day with your win..................... Login to Reply Linda Alice Fowler Date: 3/2/2024 8:59:00 AM Hi Paula. I had forgotten I entered this contest. LOL. Many thanks for reminding me and a BIG congrats for your win! :)

Bj Legros Kelley Date: 3/1/2024 1:10:00 AM 'When you stroll through the depths of my haunted memories' is such an emotive and powerful line! This is an amazing poem, and the diamond shape is beautiful as well. Login to Reply Linda Alice Fowler Date: 3/2/2024 8:57:00 AM Hi Bj. You are kind with your comments. Many thanks! :)

David Kavanagh Date: 2/28/2024 4:37:00 AM Oh I’m sure you don’t need forgiveness Linda, forgive oneself for such niggling tickles, a thought provoking poem, in a beautiful form, hope I didn’t misread the intended meaning, all the best for contest, cheers David! Login to Reply Linda Alice Fowler Date: 2/28/2024 7:00:00 AM LOL David. I agree it has a couple of different meanings...I like yours! :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/27/2024 12:52:00 PM Great idea to use this form for your poem. Good luck for the contest. Login to Reply Linda Alice Fowler Date: 2/27/2024 12:57:00 PM Many thanks Andrea. :)

Heidi Sands Date: 2/26/2024 10:54:00 AM Well written Linda :) Login to Reply Linda Alice Fowler Date: 2/27/2024 12:56:00 PM Hi Heidi. Hope all is well with you. Good to see you here. I always enjoy your visits! Thank you, Linda :)