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Building Tension

Written: February 15, 2024
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I ultimately rule over these stunning valleys,
Elm trees with mossy brows line the alleys.
Where distant peaks arise, calm and azure,
Akin to the strong tripods used for rapture.

Who can't view river stones as viable paths? 
A scad of scramblers on spurs stoning laths.
To slay fair faces, who bartered leaden blasts,
And weapons because of their leopard casts.

Who inflicted lasting wounds upon the land,
Those who pursued the avian crowns stand.
Fetched to flatten fascinating flesh but failed,
Who still flies above "fallen Tomahawk," veiled?

From my awakened gaze, I view a world,
Across eyes that bear a black shade furled.
A confined space, restricted and stretched out,
Then I cast a velvety gaze over a dumb doubt.

In a shadowed visage, this is how I mumble,
These walls, built by oppression, must crumble.
I must quit as I gaze upon my unique form,
Through opened eyes, no longer blind corm.

And behold, my unique hands create,
The space exists within my mind spate.
Nonviolent activists avoid causing friction,
Path for discovery, not building any tension.

Yield your tension a flight and let it depart,
God will never strain you over skills to impart.
Stress is only a reaction, probe not to worry,
Oddness from bodies and beliefs is blurry.

Not all stress stems from having a lot to do,
It originates from a lack of follow-through.
The potential increases with increasing strain,
Growth comes with a sense of life's innate pain.

I'm feeling hollow, not due to any sorrow,
Yet, in a sense of relief, each knot fades hollow.
The most crucial factor in ensuring lifespan,
Is staying clear of tension, worry, and strain.

Life is not a rising conflict or a stressful scene,
Life ought not to be painful; it may be serene.
It's habits that induce tension and relaxation,
Cutting rituals and building useful tension.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Ibeh Avatar
March 4, 2024 at 8:30 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest with this exceptional poem, Lasaad. Great use of imagery, metaphor and vocabulary!
Agustin Avatar
March 1, 2024 at 11:24 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... I'm delighted with your concluding stanza:"Life is not a rising conflict or a stressful scene, Life ought not to be painful; it may be serene. It's habits that induce tension and relaxation, Cutting rituals and building useful tension." God bless you.
Alex Avatar
March 1, 2024 at 7:49 PM
"In a shadowed visage, this is how I mumble, These walls, built by oppression, must crumble" - A very comprehensive work in all the ways. Congratulations!
George Avatar
March 1, 2024 at 5:06 AM
Actually I must feel proud for sharing podium with you. Congratulations on your well deserved first place win dear friend....
Jones Avatar
February 29, 2024 at 2:03 PM
Another brilliant piece congratulations on your 1st place win!
Kerr Avatar
February 29, 2024 at 7:49 AM
Dear Sotto, A magnificent philosophical addition to your illustrious canon. Streams of stellar verses emanate from your pen. Each line a golden envelope of evocative slants. Congratulations on your selection in contest Howard
George Avatar
February 21, 2024 at 11:23 PM
Even a topic like Building tension is made positive through your remarkable attitude toward life. "Not all stress stems from having a lot to do, It originates from a lack of follow-through."So very right. In my case, I grow tensed thinking that I have so much to do and much remains undone! It is because of a lack of proper planning and follow-up. "The most crucial factor in ensuring lifespan, Is staying clear of tension, worry, and strain." No psychologist can refute this great truth. As ever another great poem dear friend....!
Buhagiar Avatar
February 18, 2024 at 8:36 AM
Can we attain serenity and get rid of walls that seem to kill us? Great ideas with plenty of emotions. We need change.
Hamilton Avatar
February 15, 2024 at 4:01 PM
wow sotto this poem switches course many times but has a definite message superb write hugs Shadow
Andresen Avatar
February 15, 2024 at 1:01 PM
- Our physical or emotional reactions build our tensions ... proven or unproven ... that's just the way we men are ... reverse side of the medal, Las - Excellent writing as always :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
February 15, 2024 at 12:27 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Building Tension" write with a great ending. Have a blessed day writing away.........................
Narain Avatar
February 15, 2024 at 10:07 AM
Nice poem with the realities of life.
Pandit Avatar
February 15, 2024 at 6:39 AM
I felt the tension building as I read your poem, my friend. Life is a journey full of such---as you ably illustrate.
Jones Avatar
February 15, 2024 at 12:58 AM
Nonviolence can be a tool especially when you give it to God! Engaging read. My favorite part is Life is not a rising conflict or a stressful scene, Life ought not to be painful; it may be serene. It's habits that induce tension and relaxation, Cutting rituals and building useful tension.
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