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A gnat is bigger than a flea, but smaller still than a bigger sort of bee, until one day they all came and sat on the screen and then I stood up and SLAPPED! Date: 06/11/2019

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Date: 6/12/2019 12:31:00 AM
Funny! Unexpected, which makes it even more funny!
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Date: 6/12/2019 12:34:00 AM
Thanks a whole lot Caren for 'tis but a short of several long tales into the night I go, Aloha William

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