Valsa George Poet Rhyme

Buenos Dias- Collab

The sun is lifting the curtains so wide
Thank God for letting us see one more morn
Life's ashen shades do disappear and hide
Rejoice! One more sunny bright day is born
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Bathing in the glow of the morning sun
Breathing in deep, rose’s refreshing scent
Wishing “Buenos días” to the world is fun
Watching God’s dawn-painting, I feel content 
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There is great glory for the eyes to see
There is much for the senses to perceive
From little cares, when the mind is set free
Sure, there is reason to delight than grieve!

April.1.2023

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Collaborate with Jo Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Joanna Daniel
Syllable Count 10 in each line. HMS

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Linda Alice Fowler May 3, 2023 at 6:38 AM Vivid sunrise with Jo Valsa. A fluid flow of words. Congratulations on your win! :)

Sam Kauffman May 2, 2023 at 10:12 AM Buenos dias dear friend! You so wonderfully captured the joy of the new day in Jo's poem. A joyful greeting with gratitude flowing from your words. I am so happy to see your poem filled with morning's energy and hope on the winners list. So fun to share the podium together! Si?! que tenga un hormoso dia amiga! Bediciones -Blessings!

Paula Goldsmith May 2, 2023 at 7:21 AM Congratulations on your win. I really enjoyed this write. Have a blessed day..................

Joanna Daniel May 2, 2023 at 1:24 AM You were the only one to write on this one, Valsa, top class:) congratulations on your top win:) enjoyed our collab:) Valsa George May 2, 2023 at 4:56 AM Thank you so much Joanna for this collaboration and for selecting my poem for a win. I enjoyed collaborating with you

I Am Anaya April 4, 2023 at 3:04 PM "when the mind is set free Sure, there is reason to delight than grieve!" How rejoicing life can be. We are reminded by the poems that you bring, Valsa a nice collaboration! B0l

Stephan McBride April 3, 2023 at 5:24 AM Wow, my friend this is a beautiful poem of God's daily creation, blessed are those who see and embrace this : )

Gershon Wolf April 1, 2023 at 8:31 PM Reason to delight -- every morning with the sun's bright light! Keep up the good cheer! Sunrises and surprises, Gershon

Joseph P. DiMino April 1, 2023 at 6:49 PM Lovely, uplifting poem, Valsa; like I always say, rising out of bed, straightening up with only minimal aches and pains, is reason enough to rejoice. Then there is coffee, and a glorious sunrise -- plenty of those in Arizona. Great collaboration! Good luck with contest.

Mystic Rose Rose April 1, 2023 at 3:53 PM there are many reasons why we should delight, writing poetry is one, love your heart felt piece my friend, be well, keep penning ;)

Sotto Poet April 1, 2023 at 2:24 PM A stunning contribution to the collaborative piece, my dear friend, Valsa. I really enjoy the wonderful metaphors and the metaphysical mood, the rhythm.  This is really enlightening and inspiring.

Len Gasun April 1, 2023 at 11:35 AM A gorgeous piece for collaboration my dear poet friend. I love so much the excellent imagery, spiritual feeling, flow and everything here. So uplifting and inspiring. Thanks a lot for sharing. Best wishes to you always my dearest poet friend. Blessings. Hugs

Daniel Turner April 1, 2023 at 8:04 AM Nice collaboration you two. Ten un excelente fin de semana, Valsa:)