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Sarah's Buckets 1/11/16 When you were young we loved to be free we'd walk by the river and weave through the trees With our small buckets in hand we would go gathering rocks to friends we would show admiring our rocks with a smile and a grin We searched for the rocks again and again Now that your older and out on your own I hope you remember the rocks and the stones Though still I go on rocks filled to the top One bucket is missing But still I can't stop Some day when your older When my days are done I hope you remember the rocks and the fun I built a rock mountain with all kinds of love I hope you are proud of the work that we've done believe that I did it my love your the one I'll do it all over heart happy so fun Think of me often the fun that we had It's me that old timer your devoted dad 1/11/16

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Date: 1/17/2016 7:55:00 PM
Great poem Dean, you were right! I like it a lot! Hope to see much more!
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Dean Mobley
Date: 2/7/2016 11:30:00 PM
Thank you. Tell me, I need the truth. I think some of my poems are amazingly good. But I just can't tell. I feel like a primitive beginner. Do they read like beautiful art....what are they..???
Date: 1/11/2016 7:35:00 PM
This is a touching and terrific poem, Dean. I love the smooth, flowing lines...well done!
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Dean Mobley
Date: 1/15/2016 10:58:00 PM
Thank you David. I love Sarah.
Date: 1/11/2016 6:30:00 AM
Hi Dean Thanks for the poem, very nice, however I think it got entered into my contest by mistake please remove it from my wonderful contest as does not meet criteria thank you.
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Dean Mobley
Date: 1/15/2016 11:01:00 PM
Thbank you, My apology. Thank you for informing me.

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