Bubbles

BUBBLES a skin so thin transparent weight so slight these floating things defy gravity i love to see a crowd of these dance and rise a seeming happy family then gone such is life i have to think the old cliché have to imagine the many lives at death departing. Dave Austin

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Joe Maverick

Date: 6/25/2016 5:56:00 PM

Hi Daver, great to read the bubbles, & good and carefree piece.' just thought to look you up, as you are no doubt aware, Britain has decided to leave the E U, and it seems there is rage out there, my poem title looks most apt' some young people seem to be blaming the 'oldies' funny thing is Richard Branson a remain advocate Is 65.. that's years old.' David Cameron is 49 Tony Blair 63.. And there is this complaint that its all the young know..' now that seems to me a fuddy-duddy view, more like an older persons attitude..' Go figure..'

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 6/11/2016 9:36:00 AM

This gives the frivolous bubble a new perspective. Love this write, Daver! No air bubbles happening within your poetical pen. Keep well....Love, Mikki

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 6/10/2016 9:32:00 PM

Took an interesting turn at the end! Love it!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/8/2016 11:38:00 PM

LOve this one and seeing it here again, dear friend! A bubble of delight.