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Bubba's Poem Barn 4

Well, I got this aggitation Running round in my head Like old man armadillo In the Missus’ flower beds You see, a poem’s got a form Like a critter’s got legs And some go for live birth While others lay eggs Now the Lord creates them all, Yes, each in its kind But he gave us a name That he wants us to mind When you’re raising your boy You don’t call him a horse Lest he get in Ma’s biscuits Eats ‘em all in due course No, he’s a boy or a man Let him know who he is So that he won’t be failing When he gets a pop quiz It’s the same with these poems Each of its own form And that form’s got a name Keeps ‘em cozy and warm See a haiku’s not a sonnet, An ABC’s not an ode, Some say prose is not poetry We’re not going down that road. If you can’t make your mind up Go with Free Verse or Rhyme There’s even I Don’t Know If you’d just take the time You can usually tell If you count up the legs If you don’t know what those are There’s a question that begs… Heck, you might even try out A new form or two Cuz there’s dogs that still hunt That are older than you Some’d say I’ve gone to meddling Getting up in your face So I’ll ease back to the barn Gotta clean up the place

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Date: 10/21/2022 10:50:00 AM
Pretty clever,... Awesome
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Date: 10/21/2022 10:21:00 AM
I have been finding your Bubba's barn Pieces gently nudging me in the direction of trying out a new form.Having to limit to 2500 characters in a narrative makes it an exercise in editing that I enjoy.Which sometimes explains missing punctuation as well. Keep up the inspirational input Jeff .
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 10/21/2022 12:17:00 PM
I used to write these really LONG poems, and they were a major effort. Now, I find the different shorter forms more fun, although there are plenty I don't like. And the only way I've come to know that is by trying. Nobody cares if you don't write a good one, and most people don't even see it if you do, lol.
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 10/21/2022 12:17:00 PM
So try some, I know you'll find a form you like. Some are like sticking pegs in a crackerbarrel game, its just the right number of pegs per row, of the right colors :-)
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 10/21/2022 12:14:00 PM
So I didn't realize you wrote mostly narrative. I mean, so many poems scroll by EVERY day, it is hard, hard, hard to read many. I find I have a hard time understanding a lot of people's poems, but that's fine. A limerick is usually good for a laugh, and an English Sonnet is trouble to write. Free Verse, I frankly don't understand.
Date: 10/21/2022 8:50:00 AM
Being of the taboo write-it-then-figure-out-the-form ilk, is there a good way to go backwards? I idolize your ability to fill in form, but my mind doesn't seem willing to conform... advice?
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Becky Forbes
Date: 10/21/2022 12:22:00 PM
Great idea!! Thank you, Maestro
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 10/21/2022 11:53:00 AM
Then, just tried to read one new type/form a day, even if I didn't write one. Just to start understanding. And, when you enter a contest, you'll likely get ejected if you don't follow the form, depending on how narrowly it is defined. All in good fun to me.
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 10/21/2022 11:52:00 AM
I gotcha now, yeah, I just did rhyme for everything, then started using couplets and quatrains, or whatever. Some of these are absurdly similar. Haiku and senryu, same syllables, just different based on subject material. Haiku and monoku, 3 lines or 1 line, both 17 syllables. Crystalline, 17 syllables broken in two lines. Sheesh
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Becky Forbes
Date: 10/21/2022 9:34:00 AM
Once I googled "poems with two lines of two syllables" not knowing that was a footle. But my google-izer was not helpful. Is there a way that you know of to reliable look for the form AFTER you've created the masterpeice? I do like the suggestion of the 'I don't know" category then asking for input... I feel like most of what I do is just made up foolishness.
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 10/21/2022 9:15:00 AM
And early on, when I wasn't sure, I'd select "I don't know" and put a comment at the bottom of the poem asking advice. HTH?
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 10/21/2022 9:14:00 AM
How do you mean, Becky? I'm mostly just talking about the picklist when you create a poem. Sometimes I see Abecedarian, or ABC or Alexandrine, and it actually just rhyme or couplet, or free verse. You can of course go back and change that value if you didn't set it to start with.
Date: 10/21/2022 8:36:00 AM
Liked it, Jeff. Amusing, interesting, challenging. Good stuff!
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