Bubba's Poem Barn 4

Well, I got this aggitation
Running round in my head
Like old man armadillo
In the Missus’ flower beds

You see, a poem’s got a form
Like a critter’s got legs
And some go for live birth
While others lay eggs

Now the Lord creates them all, 
Yes, each in its kind
But he gave us a name
That he wants us to mind

When you’re raising your boy
You don’t call him a horse
Lest he get in Ma’s biscuits
Eats ‘em all in due course

No, he’s a boy or a man
Let him know who he is
So that he won’t be failing
When he gets a pop quiz

It’s the same with these poems
Each of its own form
And that form’s got a name
Keeps ‘em cozy and warm

See a haiku’s not a sonnet,
An ABC’s not an ode,
Some say prose is not poetry
We’re not going down that road.

If you can’t make your mind up
Go with Free Verse or Rhyme
There’s even I Don’t Know 
If you’d just take the time

You can usually tell
If you count up the legs
If you don’t know what those are
There’s a question that begs…

Heck, you might even try out 
A new form or two
Cuz there’s dogs that still hunt
That are older than you

Some’d say I’ve gone to meddling
Getting up in your face
So I’ll ease back to the barn
Gotta clean up the place
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Zahid Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 10:50 AM
Pretty clever,... Awesome
Rhymer Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 10:21 AM
I have been finding your Bubba's barn Pieces gently nudging me in the direction of trying out a new form.Having to limit to 2500 characters in a narrative makes it an exercise in editing that I enjoy.Which sometimes explains missing punctuation as well. Keep up the inspirational input Jeff .
Kyser Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 12:17 PM
I used to write these really LONG poems, and they were a major effort. Now, I find the different shorter forms more fun, although there are plenty I don't like. And the only way I've come to know that is by trying. Nobody cares if you don't write a good one, and most people don't even see it if you do, lol.
Kyser Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 12:17 PM
So try some, I know you'll find a form you like. Some are like sticking pegs in a crackerbarrel game, its just the right number of pegs per row, of the right colors :-)
Kyser Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 12:14 PM
So I didn't realize you wrote mostly narrative. I mean, so many poems scroll by EVERY day, it is hard, hard, hard to read many. I find I have a hard time understanding a lot of people's poems, but that's fine. A limerick is usually good for a laugh, and an English Sonnet is trouble to write. Free Verse, I frankly don't understand.
Forbes Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 8:50 AM
Being of the taboo write-it-then-figure-out-the-form ilk, is there a good way to go backwards? I idolize your ability to fill in form, but my mind doesn't seem willing to conform... advice?
Forbes Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 12:22 PM
Great idea!! Thank you, Maestro
Kyser Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 11:53 AM
Then, just tried to read one new type/form a day, even if I didn't write one. Just to start understanding. And, when you enter a contest, you'll likely get ejected if you don't follow the form, depending on how narrowly it is defined. All in good fun to me.
Kyser Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 11:52 AM
I gotcha now, yeah, I just did rhyme for everything, then started using couplets and quatrains, or whatever. Some of these are absurdly similar. Haiku and senryu, same syllables, just different based on subject material. Haiku and monoku, 3 lines or 1 line, both 17 syllables. Crystalline, 17 syllables broken in two lines. Sheesh
Forbes Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 9:34 AM
Once I googled "poems with two lines of two syllables" not knowing that was a footle. But my google-izer was not helpful. Is there a way that you know of to reliable look for the form AFTER you've created the masterpeice? I do like the suggestion of the 'I don't know" category then asking for input... I feel like most of what I do is just made up foolishness.
Kyser Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 9:15 AM
And early on, when I wasn't sure, I'd select "I don't know" and put a comment at the bottom of the poem asking advice. HTH?
Kyser Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 9:14 AM
How do you mean, Becky? I'm mostly just talking about the picklist when you create a poem. Sometimes I see Abecedarian, or ABC or Alexandrine, and it actually just rhyme or couplet, or free verse. You can of course go back and change that value if you didn't set it to start with.
Hankins Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 8:36 AM
Liked it, Jeff. Amusing, interesting, challenging. Good stuff!
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