Shreyash Sarang Poet Didactic

Brutal Bloodshed

Remembering the time of fragrance
Now everywhere spread is gloom
Vision is blur, nothing in vein
Flames are set by those insane...

Kids swayed under canopy's light
Their noise was sweet and sound
Now still is all let it move someday
As all has turned to burnt hay...

Every drop of tears are saved
For children to gratify their thirst
Suppressed are the uproar of cry
To not let the caravan descry...

Get this babel away from here
It keeps us wary and vigilant
Even lullaby cant make us sleep 
Like a nocturnal we just weep...

Efface this agony at once
Even the fern wants to stem
Hidden are the figurant and finch
And ceaseless are we of the lynch...

Cant even glimpse through the window
Fearing for a shot coming by
To know who are alive and dead 
For not being a part of this brutal bloodshed...

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Poet Destroyer A April 4, 2015 at 9:24 PM Shreyash, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Love LINDA

Skat A April 4, 2015 at 8:51 PM SHREYASH, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT Shreyash Sarang April 6, 2015 at 6:14 AM Hello SKAT.. It was a glee moment to read ur comment..thnkq for such warmth and support u shared... i'll be glad to have new friends and i am more delighted to start with you.. thnkq so much i felt like a naive poet before coming on poetrysoup but after all those comments.. im feeling strong and empowered.. :) HUGS*

Funom Makama April 4, 2015 at 6:41 AM Visitation to this piece is worth commenting and rating so high! Its a lovely piece friend. Thanks for the share. Shreyash Sarang April 6, 2015 at 6:03 AM I feel so content to share this with u... thnkq so much for the beautiful comment... :)

Poet Destroyer A April 2, 2015 at 8:43 PM Shreyash, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@ Shreyash Sarang April 3, 2015 at 10:31 AM Thnkq so much for that warm welcome LINDA .. I'm really glad to receive such a comment :)

Anne-Lise Andresen April 1, 2015 at 1:56 PM - Deep and moving poem, Shreyash !- A pleasure to read your first poem - Welcome to P-Soup - Happy Easter :) - // Anne-Lise :) Shreyash Sarang April 2, 2015 at 11:32 AM Thankyou! Anne Lise Andersen for the compliment....