Brown

I know you are here.
I can feel you,
In the tips of my fingers when I pass through the path
Broken now by soldiers of summer that once swished strong bayonet’s
Fighting a cold war before resting on the icy ground
For I am blind to you,
I can’t see you
Blighted with my fathers curse to confuse you with others

But I know you are here.
I can taste you,
In the chestnuts that swarm in the heat of the marketplace
A buzzing of warmth from a natural source
A bubbling coffee to heat tired eyes
Yes, I am blind 
But not as you think
Colour blind 
This doesn’t mean I let you fall from my sight.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Agustin Avatar
November 8, 2025 at 5:09 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A  Avatar
January 30, 2016 at 7:19 PM
Anne, A great pleasure to find and read your pen today. Love -- SKAT --
Duhart Avatar
February 2, 2009 at 6:12 AM
Great write. Welcome aboard the soup. Continue to share. You will find many friends here.
Bickerstaffe Avatar
February 2, 2009 at 3:42 AM
Remarkable phrasing and imagery... excellent construction and content. BRAVO Anne! Best wishes, Keith
 Avatar
January 24, 2009 at 7:56 AM
Any poem that relates to coffee is a hit with me. Congratulations on your third place finish in Kristin's contest. Keep on sharing your creativity with us. Wishing you continued success. Karen
Fawcett Avatar
January 23, 2009 at 4:22 AM
Congratulations, Anna, on your well deserved WIN in Kristin's delightful contest.
George   Avatar
January 22, 2009 at 4:09 PM
Congratulations on your win in Kristin's contest, dear Robin. Well done!
Gass Avatar
January 22, 2009 at 9:02 AM
Deep with rich images. Excellent write. Congratulations on your well deserved win. Love, Robin
Jordan Avatar
January 22, 2009 at 7:46 AM
Ann congratulations on placing third in Kristin's contest - God Bless, MJ
Ginn Avatar
January 22, 2009 at 7:42 AM
Congratulations on being so new and placing ,totally awesome Anne. Laurie
Winter Avatar
January 22, 2009 at 7:30 AM
Wow. Awesome write Anne! Congratulations on your well deserved win in Kristin's contest! Love, Shar
Richards Avatar
January 22, 2009 at 7:12 AM
Excellent writing, Anne!!! Congratulations on your winning place in Kristen's color contest! Well deserved!~ Carrie
Brown Avatar
January 13, 2009 at 3:30 PM
Welcome to PoetrySoup. I hope to read more poetry from you. Love, Carol
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace