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Brown- Your Eyes

Brown – Your Eyes Dark and rich As nature Color of the trees and soil A hue of luminous browns A blend of shadows in the sky The color of your eyes Gazing brings me deeper As I descend into colors so rustic Shades of taupe fading at dusk Taking me deeper into your sight Like twilight Chocolate coffee Galloping horses from Renaissance Embroidered in a spectrum A gallery of browns Cover me like a gown The colors of the earth As in the chestnut tree Where we sit Your eyes find me I surrender To the splendor Of your eyes Margaret Franceschini (March 17, 2014)

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Date: 4/6/2014 11:29:00 AM
Another beautiful poem. A very creative write. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla
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Date: 3/24/2014 8:51:00 AM
Margaret What a splendid and creative write. You took a "bland" color and turned it into some great things. Thanks for the wonderful comment on my Friendship poem. Welcome to The Soup.
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Date: 3/23/2014 6:52:00 PM
Great expression and color Enjoyed it Margaret!
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Date: 3/19/2014 12:38:00 PM
Man Girl! This Is True Blue Poetry And One Can Only Imagine, Their Splendours Betwixt These Loving Eyes Such, Beauty ~ My Love, Always & Forever, John ... Ps., Thank You, Beautiful Margaret For Your Kind Visit And, 'SoupMail!'
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Date: 3/18/2014 4:29:00 AM
WOW, You are a VERY talented poet Margaret...You have taken the color brown and turned it into an elegant and compelling piece of work...Welcome to Poetry Soup - Tim
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Date: 3/17/2014 7:10:00 PM
What can brown do for you? A fascinatingly good write.
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Date: 3/17/2014 3:55:00 PM
Awesome; glad I visited. :) // paul
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